Discussion in 'Audio Emcee Hook Ups' started by Newportz, Aug 18, 2013.
Judges votes are
Wird - 1
Buzz - 1
Bonnie I ain't counting yours until you break it down a lil more
The day you beat me Nascar will be full of Asian drivers
I think wird got him, but joes track was much more listenable.
Joe, work on being more aggressive.
Yeah I got you.. there was zero chance I was going to not do Pedo lines though.. I tried but then when I was writing I said "fuck it, lets bite Hollyfield's ear off".. I shoulda never made the rule I couldn't use the lines, but it is what it is.
That's what I'm learning from this and the GRB battles.. with my battle tracks I need to be more aggressive with my delivery.. But my flow is naturally laid back so I feel like it sounds forced if I get too aggressive.
I'm also learning I need to care much less about my rhymes schemes and flow.. and just put 90% of my effort into writing dope punch lines.. Which is the exact opposite of how I write songs.
Ill vote when I get home it's a hard one
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Keep a dope rhyme scheme and try to incorporate punch lines/ personals, and mix personals and punch lines.
Try to make funny lines.
Regular disses are okay but try to be more creative and come harder. You're pretty good already, and have nice punch lines[the spiderman punch line of round one comes to mind]
Preciate it.. between that Spider-Man line and this Batman line.. I think I just need to do nothing but superhero punches.
bonnie is a known wird of pley groupie
@ her being a judge
lmfao aww man.
the deal is wird, u have to give me the 100 for a beat
lmao @ no friends to unbutton and unzip. that line killed me when I heard it
Shit I remember last year when I started hangin out with u again (god knows why) and you would always be like "DUDE I CANT BELIEVE WERE HANGING OUT AGAIN, I THOUGHT ID NEVER SEE YOU AGAIN MAN", and I didnt give a shit... lol.
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And i figured youd bust grapes since I took your girl out last month and was kissing all up on her fucking ho ass at that parade just so youd find out and do something but still youre behind a monitor calling me gay. Now that is gay.
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Women hold grudges,I dont hate anyone.
Smh. I seen nigguhs killed for less.
so wait.. DQ or?
Vote it up brah
Wird got the $ due to a slight rule break.. But a real winner still has to be crowned. So judges need to vote.
It's 1-1 right now
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