Carousel..you'll never hear another track like this EVER!!

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  1. illogikul

    illogikul Dirty South Legend

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    my boy on first verse his third song he ever recorded so he still kinda new...drop links muhfuckaz
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  3. illogikul

    illogikul Dirty South Legend

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    thanks i'ma hit that up tomorrow i'm madd sleepy n got school
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    illogikul Dirty South Legend

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    illogikul Dirty South Legend

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    wake up fuckas
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    illogikul Dirty South Legend

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    get back up there
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  7. illogikul

    illogikul Dirty South Legend

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    getcha ass back up there
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  8. nawshus

    nawshus STAMPEDE!

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    ima up this for you and peep tomorrow and reply..
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  9. Paragraaaf

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    WTF @ THIS BEAT LMFAO...this is actually dope...lmfao wow...ok first dude...flow is perfect for the beat at first but loose cannon was off...otherwise its right on...second dude...flow is good...it gets better as it goes along...these verses are short lol...second dude in the third verse mumbled a bit...damn this is actually pretty good of a track lol...LMFAO yes ur outro is completely correct lol

    leave me some lovin lol
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  10. nawshus

    nawshus STAMPEDE!

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    rofl@this fucking beat omg jesus christ at how funny this beat is i swear outkast should be on this... dude in the first verse had a good flow to match the beat but his lyrics were kinda generic, decent ish though... ill your flow matching the beat as well but you switching it up by your multi syllable usage, diggin it man, work on that quality still.. other than that this is dope man, keep'em coming..
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  11. chucke

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    Tongues tumblin over the beat

    The hook was a nice change…. vibe is cool folks…

    "Back on the scene, call tho po…"

    The melodies spit by both mcs were catchy... both yall got some flow-mo....most of the lines blended well with the rhythm...the flows coulda been just a tad bit tighter, that's bein picky, but besides that, this was a solid collabo... nice work...pz.
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  12. TAB

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    This beat is pure insanity. First verse is solid with a matching flow, but presence needs to be elevated. This track has the potential of being dope, but you seemingly wrote quickly to it using generic and repetitive lines, making it less interesting. Next time you hear a weird beat, don't instantly think to yourself "this'll be a joke song", attentively listen to the beat and brainstorm ways to make your verses as weird as the beat is. Your voice doesn't appeal to me. 2nd guy is ehhhh. Overall decent drop.
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