~*canabi*~ vs raw clown

Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by canabi, Oct 6, 2003.

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  1. canabi

    canabi Blow Me

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    10 lines
    5=win
    3-0=ko
    no dr crew or bitch votes
    test
  2. -Punchline-

    -Punchline- New Member

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    checkin in..
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  3. -Punchline-

    -Punchline- New Member

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    I only need 8 for your verse to get ate!
    so I guess ur my next beef on the dinner plate..!

    check​





    your pussy, u got more dike tendencys than Britney an Maddona..
    This kid stinks, well at least he knows he has a cunt rag persona..
    u dont want any drama,why'd you step up for ur holacaust..
    the only time u a[dressing] is when u want ur salad tossed..
    be glad uv'e had a loss, get used to it chump...
    cuz u force more shit than a clump tryin to be losin a dump...
    It's Hurtful ur slump!,my punches got u in wirlwinds..
    u doin head spins to boyfriends an this Kabasa King dont deserve wins...​
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  4. canabi

    canabi Blow Me

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    ite chyo ima have ta show ya how its done

    kid ya a lil girl to me yous da type ta rock a hair bow
    like a dingy to a ocean liner ya gettin stuck in my under tow
    bitch ya garbage i cant believe you thinkin u raw, clown
    talkin shit n postin all day ya a verb wannabe, kid ya a noun
    ya describe people places an things that you wanna be
    so stop tryina describe me kid cuz you aint eva gunna b like me
    put makup on ya face n call yaelf a clown da real term is crossdresser
    ya verse's sux da type i put on papa den through in a garbage compressor
    da name clown describes you perfect cuz lik a circus ya rhymes is amusin
    they the perfect example of what not to do a verse that sux n is confusin

    not my best but w/e

    nice verse do clown

    no hate homie
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  5. Penitence

    Penitence Penny.

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    Raw - Well.. You had some nice concepts but the punches were weak.. Flow was ok and you had some multies.. Overall This was ok..

    Canabi - This verse was pretty weak.. Like Raw you had some nice concepts but the punches wernt there.. Flow was eh, not many multies.. Overall This was ok..

    My Vote Goes To - Raw

    Vote on my battle vs. Nu-Sense

    Bet
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  6. -Punchline-

    -Punchline- New Member

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    1-0 uppin for votes..
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  7. -Punchline-

    -Punchline- New Member

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    1-0 uppin for votes..
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  8. BIG-L

    BIG-L My member is platinum

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    vote=raw clown...better flow structure n punches .. stay up
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  9. BIG-L

    BIG-L My member is platinum

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    talkin shit n postin all day ya a verb wannabe, kid ya a noun

    ^^^^ a noun is a person place or thing ,
    a verb is an action word-

    would u rather be a person place or thing or an action word?

    no sense lines cannabi ... no beef tho , wasnt terrible
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  10. -Punchline-

    -Punchline- New Member

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    2-0 uppin thanks L for the Vote...

    uppin
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  11. -Punchline-

    -Punchline- New Member

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    uppin for a KO...
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    uppin for a KO
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  14. c-twizze

    c-twizze New Member

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    close call. i liked some of c's stuff but
    vote: raw
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  15. -Punchline-

    -Punchline- New Member

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    thats a KO..pz..thanks for the battle..
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  16. Tha Juggla

    Tha Juggla Professional Magician

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    i know my vote wont count


    but i would have voted for Raw Clown anyways..

    Raw Clowsn-had a couple good lines, nothing really outstanding, flow got stale at some points, could work on the humor of your verses, nice ending


    Canabi-first off try writing your words so people can understand them...flowwas stale, rhyme structure was stale, flow was forced a little, work on the humor of your verses
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