"Can You Feel It Coming?"

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  1. urboyeon

    urboyeon New Member

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    He can feel the world moving
    is it only he?

    He can feel his soul burning
    is he going too deep?

    Deep as the core
    deep as the pitts

    What if he should slip?
    will he fall too his death?

    Taking his very last breathe
    he can feel it coming

    But Will he be running?
    no...for he will be rising

    Rising for a purpose
    proving that life is not worthless

    Rising for a cause
    and happily dying for it

    But not without a battle
    exposing his true capabilities n blood brothers
    that he has secretly hid in his shadow

    Knowing that he is not immortal
    he has been constantly preparing for this day

    Viewing this picture from light years away
    he can feel it coming...

    but now......He is ready......


    THE END
    test
  2. ebonisunset

    ebonisunset Nemesis of Truth

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    I really like the poem the message that it entailed and i loved the flow cant wait to hear more
    test
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