Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by fuck_a_nella, Mar 11, 2007.
drop the comments, critiques whatever
this beat is cool. like the vibe.
flow is cool.. id mos def fuck with you man good shit..
peepin....beat was nice,the drums is sick. delivery n voice was kinda odd to me.flow was pretty coo tho.the quality was pretty coo, no complaints with it.hook was coo,on some deep ish goin well wit the verses.
overall this was coo,not into the voice really but besides that this was coo...
props to u...
hmmm...ionno bout ya voice...sounds like some Vinnie Paz or Necro type of shit...if you not stressing that then theres nuthion ya can do, but if ya are forcing it, ionno...not my normal steeze...nuttin 'gainst you...just me
general feel of this was coo tho...good lyrics and emotion throughout...hook was nice too...everything came thru nicely...good drop
Beats Cool Its Different
You Flow Aint Riding This Well Sound Off Beat
Hook Is Cool Though Best Part Of Song
Overall This Is Below Average Wouldnt Bump
beat fits the topic.. needs to be mixed down better to get the full effect.
Beat is pretty nice.... I really like the percussion and drums on it... your delivery is nice... the voice don't mess with me like people been sayin'... lol. The refrain is well done... tho it sounds like your voice is kinda slurred on it. The bridges on the beat is real different, I'm feelin' that. Overall this is nice... thanks for the response.
The beat is kinda wierd...I'll say its the strong link to the track. The chorus?...ehh? But your verses were coo....you have a lot of emotion in ya flow, which is always a plus. I think that's my problem...lol. Anyways, a decent track none the less.
1. Keep the verses and the beat...
2. The chorus was the weak link...
3. Ya emotion is ya strong point....
Peep my shit....
Give a nigga ya honest critique....all help is appreciated.
my mind was somewhere else while I was doing this track son, and listen to my angry voice bitch ahahha, anyway thank you ppl for the replies.
Beat is Cool erratic but you flow well over it sounds
like it was chopped from a original though
Cant tell if flow falls or the beat is just that erratic
emotion was felt
Hook decent love to hear ya on another beat
I didn't like the beat...i dunno I think cause it sounded unorthodoxed.
Like someone else said your voice through me off...I can't really put my finger on it...it's just something about it that i didn't really like
The lyrics were straight, but due to the beat being the way it is...it didn't really allow you to showcase your delivery and flow. All in all this was ok, but not really my type of vibe.
your voice soundin a little different from normal homie - like you're tweakin it just a bit - flows hittin tho, you got that shit - presence is pretty strong,beats slappin - jeaah - i've heard you come stronger all around, but this is pretty solid right here
good work duke
keep doin it!
heres my link
returnin the favor...
beats kinda killer...voice is good...deliverys aight...nothin crazy...got presence...lyrics ain't nothin major...contents straight...like the hook...second verse a li'l iller on the flow and rhyme scheme at the beginning...overall, good track...really like what the beat's doin...
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