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  1. fuck_a_nella

    fuck_a_nella New Member

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  2. HYPNOTIK

    HYPNOTIK Fully Loaded

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    this beat is cool. like the vibe.

    flow is cool.. id mos def fuck with you man good shit..

    stay up
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  3. ceson

    ceson ....Ceson Wordz

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    peepin....beat was nice,the drums is sick. delivery n voice was kinda odd to me.flow was pretty coo tho.the quality was pretty coo, no complaints with it.hook was coo,on some deep ish goin well wit the verses.

    overall this was coo,not into the voice really but besides that this was coo...
    props to u...
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  4. Sick-Scripts

    Sick-Scripts Stylish Irish = McFly

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    hmmm...ionno bout ya voice...sounds like some Vinnie Paz or Necro type of shit...if you not stressing that then theres nuthion ya can do, but if ya are forcing it, ionno...not my normal steeze...nuttin 'gainst you...just me

    general feel of this was coo tho...good lyrics and emotion throughout...hook was nice too...everything came thru nicely...good drop
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  5. Battlefields

    Battlefields Swaggin' On You

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    Beats Cool Its Different

    You Flow Aint Riding This Well Sound Off Beat
    Hook Is Cool Though Best Part Of Song

    Overall This Is Below Average Wouldnt Bump
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  6. Got Bank? INC

    Got Bank? INC New Member

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  7. IProFound

    IProFound Chokyonim

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    Beat is pretty nice.... I really like the percussion and drums on it... your delivery is nice... the voice don't mess with me like people been sayin'... lol. The refrain is well done... tho it sounds like your voice is kinda slurred on it. The bridges on the beat is real different, I'm feelin' that. Overall this is nice... thanks for the response.

    -PF
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  8. AIM Ringleader

    AIM Ringleader New Member

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  9. Kal-EL

    Kal-EL Krazed Familia

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    Peepin now...

    The beat is kinda wierd...I'll say its the strong link to the track. The chorus?...ehh? But your verses were coo....you have a lot of emotion in ya flow, which is always a plus. I think that's my problem...lol. Anyways, a decent track none the less.

    I'd say

    1. Keep the verses and the beat...
    2. The chorus was the weak link...
    3. Ya emotion is ya strong point....

    Nice track

    5.5/10

    Peep my shit....

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1037553

    Give a nigga ya honest critique....all help is appreciated.
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  10. fuck_a_nella

    fuck_a_nella New Member

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    my mind was somewhere else while I was doing this track son, and listen to my angry voice bitch ahahha, anyway thank you ppl for the replies.
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  11. Bane tha Oracle

    Bane tha Oracle Ruin of Nations

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    Beat is Cool erratic but you flow well over it sounds
    like it was chopped from a original though
    Cant tell if flow falls or the beat is just that erratic
    emotion was felt
    Hook decent love to hear ya on another beat

    5.5\10

    Much Respect
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  12. Non$en$e

    Non$en$e The Truth

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    I didn't like the beat...i dunno I think cause it sounded unorthodoxed.

    Like someone else said your voice through me off...I can't really put my finger on it...it's just something about it that i didn't really like

    The lyrics were straight, but due to the beat being the way it is...it didn't really allow you to showcase your delivery and flow. All in all this was ok, but not really my type of vibe.
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  13. littleslimlocc

    littleslimlocc New Member

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    your voice soundin a little different from normal homie - like you're tweakin it just a bit - flows hittin tho, you got that shit - presence is pretty strong,beats slappin - jeaah - i've heard you come stronger all around, but this is pretty solid right here

    good work duke

    keep doin it!

    holla back

    heres my link

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1036728
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  14. fuck_a_nella

    fuck_a_nella New Member

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  15. Tha Artful Scrybe

    Tha Artful Scrybe Active Member

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    returnin the favor...

    beats kinda killer...voice is good...deliverys aight...nothin crazy...got presence...lyrics ain't nothin major...contents straight...like the hook...second verse a li'l iller on the flow and rhyme scheme at the beginning...overall, good track...really like what the beat's doin...
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