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  1. Philly_215

    Philly_215 The Silent Poet

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    She built me with her own flesh and soul.
    Made me strong with her own morals and bones.
    Pushed a boy to be a man when all I wanted to do was take the easiest path and go with the flow.
    Taught me how to smile to let the world see my glow.
    Answered my million whats this so her boy would have a clue.
    Gave me insight so I could see even in dark days and find shelter in heavy rains.

    Her heart was my beat
    her breath was for me
    Her lips spoke my hymns
    Her skin was my armor
    Some times I Wonder.......
    why me.........
    but this is the man she built.
    so why not me when she needs.
    test
  2. Philly_215

    Philly_215 The Silent Poet

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    not a single reply i must be slipping!!
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  3. BLACKANGEL

    BLACKANGEL Angelic Professor

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    very nice... but i have to say i wanted just a little more... i felt this piece was cut short...
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  4. Philly_215

    Philly_215 The Silent Poet

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    thank you ill post more stuff soon!
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  5. GaLaTeA

    GaLaTeA GymArt

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    Exceptional ode.
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  6. SAMARA

    SAMARA truth is a sword

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    dear mama came to mind... nice drop
    test
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