Build N Destroy, ((drop Links)), New track, jay hu productions

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  1. _RhYmEs_

    _RhYmEs_ Need Dope Beats??

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    Wut up, wut up, damn its been a while but i got some NEW rhymes on the soundclick,, shit is crazy, but as always the feedback is appreciated and will be returned, so holla at the kid, let me know wat ya think,

    Build N Destroy

    Check out my site at www.soundclick.com/rhymes

    ~Rhymes~
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  2. _RhYmEs_

    _RhYmEs_ Need Dope Beats??

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    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Look
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  3. V.I.K

    V.I.K The Feedback Returner

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    Beat - Bananas. Has a victorious feel to it, especially on the chorus break down. Props if u did this man. Word up...

    Verses - As i was listening, the think that stood out to me the most was your delivery. Ya flow and word flippin combine together for a crazy outcome. I applaud u, cuz i know that shit is pretty difficult to pull off. Can get tongue tied easily. Plus u keep it consistent throughout, and fall off nowhere... On top of that, u were able to pull off those doubles accurately. It can be easy to muck up your doubles at at least one point. You avoid that and keep em tight throughout your whole song. Well done. U dont have any adlibs on this song, but this drop still works out well. U bring a lot to the track without the added element of adlibs. It allows for more of a focus on you just spittin as well, which is a nice touch and change. Finally, presence wise, u deliver nicely. You keep the energy throughout the song, and although u dont make use of cadence, there's something about it all that just makes it so u wanna listen.

    Hook - Im feelin this hook. It fits well to the beat. Which is important, becuz that's what makes this hook stand out the most. The fact that it sounds good to the beat. Plus you make use of a nice melody, and some well thought out words. Nicely done

    Overall - An above average track. You do a lot of good things on this drop. You keep it consistent from beginning to end. Plus u fall off nowhere... On top of it all, you get on a beat that's dope, and deliver a tight hook. Good job. I enjoyed listening. Ez

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  4. Unda Dwella

    Unda Dwella Do you matter?

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    This is nice. Lyrics, flow, delivery are all very solid. Hook's dope too. I had to dl this to peep it so I might hold on to it. You remind me abit of Nas voise-wise.

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  5. _RhYmEs_

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    good looks all links returned,
    Bump this

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  6. Hibernation

    Hibernation Well-Known Member

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    Oh Shit

    Glad I Peeped This, Shits Sick, You Sound Like A More Lyrical Oriented Nas.. Dope Shit Son
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  7. Diztinkt

    Diztinkt New Member

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    More Lyrical Nas? This •••••z Already Cocky, Please Sonn, Some Of Us Actually Have To Talk To him, You Make It Harder For Us When You Say Shit Like That LOL
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  8. Hibernation

    Hibernation Well-Known Member

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    I Meant, He Seems More Focused On Lyrics, An It Shines More Then Some Of His Other Aspects.. Where As Nas Is Just All Around Illness
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  9. _RhYmEs_

    _RhYmEs_ Need Dope Beats??

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    Yo timmy go try to shoot up that 12 yr old house, you house ass •••••, hahahha, but i understand the nas resemblence, and i know the god is iLL,

    ~Rhymes~
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    Diztinkt New Member

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    House ••••• Is Right, Cuz I Shoot Up Houses-•••••, Believe Dat. *harlem shakes*
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  11. _RhYmEs_

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    this winky right ass ni.gga, shiiiiiiiiit, feedback on this shit, damn

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  12. fuck_a_nella

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    the hook fittin to the beat and the concept is nice dawg, the lyrics and delivery were very nice, the delivery and flow fittin the joint very good, quality is nice too , i liked this very much man, very nice listen.

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  13. _RhYmEs_

    _RhYmEs_ Need Dope Beats??

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    aight , BUmp this,
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  14. GODSCRIBE

    GODSCRIBE Meet the Retailer

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  15. Non$en$e

    Non$en$e The Truth

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    yo this was hot, first off the beat was tight as shit...this is like that raw underground ny shit of the 90's...your flow, delivery and scheme was fluid...I love peeping stuff like this on the board...and yea we should mos def collab one day...hit me up on aim whenever you see me on...Peace
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  16. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    listenin .... beats dope ... Voice fits this nice ... comin sick wit it ...dope track right here ...
    hook sounds sick as well ... aint nothin wrong wit this track shits fire all the way through ...
    hit up mine

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  17. _RhYmEs_

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    its the fu.cking truth that im gonna get slept on. but is all good, No doubt i see a NOnsense Rhymes collabo soon, werd up, i got love for jerz and them so called massage palors in AC, shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit, werd im there this weekend in the poker tables, texas hold em ••••• Wat,

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  18. _RhYmEs_

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    UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPIng it
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  19. _RhYmEs_

    _RhYmEs_ Need Dope Beats??

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    hey LOOK^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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  20. Charlie_Br0wn

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    Aight Let's Listen...

    I Love This Beat Man...Whoever Did It...Big Ups To Them.

    Alright...Lyrics Are Nice Man...Very Poetic And Deep. Your Flow Is On Point...Feeling The Emotion. Delivery...Is Nice. You Could Definatly Feel The Lyrics On This. The Hook Was Good But Some Of The Adlibs Didn't Sound Too Clear...Maybe Cuz My Headphones Are Broken ANd I Can Only Hear On One Ear LoL.

    Overall Nice Track Man...The Last Verse Is My Favorite. Flow Is Crazy On It.

    Nice Shit.
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