bruising again

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  1. vinous

    vinous New Member

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    who will appreciate such melancholic tidings
    take the time to leaf through past years findings
    those who held fast to the reigns of joy
    soon languish, their hearts a battered toy
    love is not so grand to be compared with the blind
    for with such impairments a healthy brain you can find
    darkness reveals the truest things ever to be writ
    love is more like that of a crazed half wit
    for who without madness gladly chooses a life
    filled with daily pained longing, wretched suff'ring and strife
    though when truth comes to defy feigned logic
    and logic bows down to pain
    one cannot pretend of a wish
    to never suffer again
    whispering under our breath all known profanity
    we losing again, we bruising again,
    cos we love love and its insanity
    test
  2. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    "we losing again, we bruising again,
    cos we love love and its insanity"


    I was diggin' this more than your other piece that I had just read. I found this to be more pure and natural, more from your heart. I also thought the closing lines were a symbol that you both love eachother and drives you insane knowing that, but keep up the fights, because that's what love does to you, etc. Many meanings dwelling in my head of what you truely meant (it's early in the morning, cut me some slack heh) but keep up the writing, no doubt. My blessings..
    test
  3. h.wood

    h.wood IMAGINATION SUPER STAR

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    ^ thats the line i like best too. i agree love is alittle crazy lol
    test
  4. skandelous_lala

    skandelous_lala back from the dead

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    interesting perspective on the most written about emotion in the world.

    i too, liked the last couple lines the most. you did good.
    test
  5. vinous

    vinous New Member

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    yay, u like.
    this was more about feeling bitter about love, u know, not wanting to go there again, hating the thought of goin there again cos its so crazy and painful, but then, somehow u find urself fallin in luv agen, and im like, shit! i hate this but i love this, and eventually openin urself up agen, make sense?
    test
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