breathlesss vs Gr8 Whyte HYpe (1-1)

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  1. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    RULES & REGULATIONS

    DEADLINES

    [01] - The deadline for verses is Friday @ 11:59pm PST.
    [02] - There are absolutely NO extensions under any circumstances. For this reason, It is unnecessary to request extensions. I apologize in advance.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 11:59am PST.​

    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match. If there are less than 5 battles available to vote on, you must vote on all available battles.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly. Failure to post your links will result in a DQ. It is not our responsibility to make sure you voted.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY. Specifically, vote under the name that you signed in under, please.​

    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
    [12] - An agreement of a line limit will serve as the maximum allowed; competitors are allowed to post under an agreed limit, but never over. An agreement is not required. Upon failure to agree to a line limit, the second competitor is thereby required to meet the limit set by the first competitor to post.
    [13] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.​

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  2. GWHype

    GWHype New Member

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    i really doubt this fuckers gonna show
    so this verse is a fuck n leave it type hoe
    leave breathlesss dead, he already aint breathing
    he isn't showin, this is all i'll be needing


    that's it, i know he isn't gonna show up. Honestly, this league is asscheeks.
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  3. Brown Recluse

    Brown Recluse Hermit, no crabs

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    Look at my battle with Burd and rethink your actions homie...spit those bars no matter what
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  4. GWHype

    GWHype New Member

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    i'm not sayin everyone in it sucks, i'm sayin that 80% of the battlers don't show, so fuck this league.
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  5. Brown Recluse

    Brown Recluse Hermit, no crabs

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    I think you misunderstood what I meant...Look at my battle as an example...Burd was an opponent I thought was going no-show...I was wrong and lost as a result.
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  6. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    Stop flooding the thread, we can discuss the state of the league in the Lounge. The only posts in a battle thread should be check-in's, verses, votes and links.

    As far as this battle, I will put myself back in if you want a battle this week, Hype. If you edit the verse by noon PST tomorrow, I will post by 1.

    Since I'm here:

    No shows are a part of the league, plus, it has just restarted. After a few weeks, it will get more consistent. It always is. In the meantime, just use it as an opportunity to experiemnt and get feedback if you get a no show.

    I hope to see you signed into my league next week.
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  7. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    Alright, the legend is back, here at last...
    but it ain't been no god damn seven years, and a half...man...
    Actin' like you run shit, but you never had recognition
    Go sign up for a marathon in a freshly fertilized farmer's field...

    ...you'd be better off winnin' that kinda competition
    You illiterate bitch, you'll get obliterated by my alliteration
    And this is just a little taste dog, imagine if I actually let you lick my face...uhhh...
    Quit askin' me that shit in private messages, it ain't gonna happen, fag

    I bet you got a big ol' faded out hatchet man tat on one a' yer saggy man tits
    Go back to your fam, stupid, you do not belong on rapmusic.com
    Bitchin' about the the rules, dude, bangin' yer broad would be breakin' Talmudic law
    She's one of those creeping things crawlin' the earth unclean, an ape like kike

    You ain't seen no great white hype since the first time you did cocaine lines, right?
    Then, three quarters of a decade fly by and you're still tryin' to chase my life...
    You're gonna have to wait nine times as long,
    until your dead, to ever develop divine rhymes this strong
    Go to bed
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  8. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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  9. Brown Recluse

    Brown Recluse Hermit, no crabs

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    breathless is the winner by default IMO...wish Gr8 Whyte Hype would've heeded my prior words.
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  10. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    Pretty obvious who won here. Would of liked to see Gr8t White drop a verse.

    Breathless - nice verse, some strong punches, but I just don't like your flow and rhyme scheme in this. Other than that, everything is pretty solid. I just couldn't follow the flow to it as well until I read and re read a few times to catch where the rhymes were.

    Vote -breathless
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  11. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    breathlesss wins
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