"Breathless"

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  1. reincarnation

    reincarnation New Member

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    A face of a hollow man that fell into an abyss,
    that fought against the heart of loneliness,
    walks toward to the door of an eternity.
    Eras of dreams that he once lived in brought uncertainty.
    The reflection of his own flesh melted away
    like a pure silky chocolate as the world knows that love is not to persuade.

    The ocean of devine that sleeps beyond the mountain creek,
    the man saw the woman of the past kissing smoother than being meek.
    The noise of the forgotten memories
    blessed the vivid world giving humane charities.
    The man suddenly asked to himself, "if I don't know the meaning to express
    what is meaning of having a life to stress?"
    "Is it not for to reminice of my old love that I trust,
    to see things as the world waters my metallic heart to rust?"
    "I am nothing, will you forgive me
    as I am blind to god while you flew away to the heaven freely?"
    The eyes that bloom within her
    grew and grew till she realizes his affection have occur.
    test
  2. Dark_Angel

    Dark_Angel Dark_Angel

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    this was a great peice, the imagery was great and it worked really well..nice peice
    test
  3. reincarnation

    reincarnation New Member

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    thanks darkangel, thanks for a reply.
    I'm appreciated
    test
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