"Breakin the Chains" - PROOF i'm one of the illest here *DROP LINKS*

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  1. Tha Artful Scrybe

    Tha Artful Scrybe Active Member

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    upward sleepers
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    mad views, no replies, huh?


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  5. Non$en$e

    Non$en$e The Truth

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    aight check it, ya flow is cool, ya lyrics are cool, BUT my only complaint is your emotion & charisma. You're rapping real soft, like you're whisper rapping or something, like your parents are in the other room sleep and you ain't trying to wake them up or something lol. You gotta put more emotion into it cause everything else is cool you got everything else down pack. Get live man when you on the mic rap like nobody can't fuck with you, nah mean? Other then that you got potential, I liked the third verse the most though

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  6. Tha Artful Scrybe

    Tha Artful Scrybe Active Member

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    bet...i feel you...old sound card didn't really pick up the natural feel i was goin for...the final version wit better qwality should pop a li'l more...thanks fer the feed...

    "...so i'm...slippin messages in lyrics like spirituals...evidence of ellison's description of invisible..."


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  7. _RhYmEs_

    _RhYmEs_ Need Dope Beats??

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    Aiight Im listening,

    flow is on point, you got your shit packed, lyrics is tight, illy shit, quality is blah blah,, but i understand that, beat is tight, you should've put more energy of the lyrics that you saying, and to really blend it well wit the beat, but overall this was coo though, i agree wit my Negro Nonsense aka young chris tucker, the third verse was short and sweet, good shit kid, keep at your grizly,

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=930024
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  8. freakin mohican

    freakin mohican Ain't Gotta Be Thug

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    listening.....beat is cool. ya flow and lyrics are pretty good. but like the other dudes have said ur emotion needs sum work. gotta get loud and excited. most of it isn't what u say...its how u say it. but overall it ain't bad yo. keep doin ya thing. one!!

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  9. Tha Artful Scrybe

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    bet, appreciate the feed...i'll check links tomorrow evening...
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  10. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    listenin .... Intro was aight ... nice to start a topic ... flows comin off aight needs more emotion to me it seems ... it aint bad though pretty dope ...
    hook I wasnt really feelin ... second verse I wasnt feelin how you flowed on it ...
    Overall not bad It was ok
    hit up mine

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=932336
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