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Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Carpe Noctem, May 15, 2011.

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  1. Carpe Noctem

    Carpe Noctem Neos Helios

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    Skim the narrative in your eyes
    Stare deep
    Deeper into the crystallized eternity
    Compressed inside your skull
    Climb through
    Freefall along your sweet expanse
    And through your eyes
    See the world in all its unfettered beauty.
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  2. Mikaella Ocean

    Mikaella Ocean Well-Known Member

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    together.


    love when you write baby
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  3. Carpe Noctem

    Carpe Noctem Neos Helios

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    Thanks beba.
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  4. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    really awesome images, i like that line "freefall along", thats smooth sound man. "skull" was such a jarring word too, which fits with the title.
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