"Brand New Day"

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  1. EpicLipz

    EpicLipz New Member

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    Yeah i know mic dow posted it already
    but he shocked the fuck out of me
    and put a fuckin homo ass title about dzk
    and im not into that bullshit so just reply in here.

    now with that said.

    ansane on the beat
    1. MicDow
    hook - both
    2. Prod

    www.myspace.com/shspteam

    holla back with links and i will get to them asap.

    - Prod
    test
  2. suspekct

    suspekct New Member

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    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=14554215#post14554215 I AINT NEVER LIKED NONE OF ANSANE SHIT HE AT THE TOP OF SOUNDCLICK CHARTS BUT I DON'T C WHY CATZ LIKE HIS BEATS, OKAY THIS SOUND LIKE A COOL LIL SONG, VOICE IS A LIL BIT WIERD SOUND LIKE A CHIP MUNK SLOWED DOWN A LIL BIT FUCKS IT UP A LIL BIT, DISTRACTS THE LISTENER FROM THE STORY. NICE HOOK CUZ THE WORD PLAY ONLY.YEA THE ONLY FEED I COULD GIVE IS TO TAKE A LIL EMOTION OUT THE FIRST VERSE DO IT LIKE THE SECOND VERSE WAS RAPPED THAT SOUNDS MORE NORMAL. kEEP IT UP SHORT SHIT
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  3. EpicLipz

    EpicLipz New Member

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    hit ya back
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  4. EpicLipz

    EpicLipz New Member

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    hollywood
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  5. Jae Mouf

    Jae Mouf Tha Boy Better than Ted

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    not really my type of beat and subject matter...I dont really like listening to music like this...Im not on that deep ish like that...first dude was on beat but nothing really grabbing about him...

    chorus...is ehhh

    2nd dude...flow schemes were good at point but i dunno this song just isnt doing it for me i dont liek the beat and i cant really follow...but ya flow is straight..


    Keep doing ya thing...if you got on different beats and different shit i think id feel what you do more just my style and shit..
    test
  6. Sick-Scripts

    Sick-Scripts Stylish Irish = McFly

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    beat seems nice...dude comes in...might be dudes voice or mic quality/mixing technique but somethin dont sit right wit me...maybe a de-esser? ionno...lyrically not bad...good storytelling ability

    hook does what its supposed...nothin amped or catchy but it sets the mood

    prod...damn...you dont sound anything like i remember...haha...not bad man...imagery and storytelling all on point...good shit

    hit me up sometime...peace
    test
  7. littleslimlocc

    littleslimlocc New Member

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    whats good

    this is pretty good, im honestly not feelin the beat, first verse was decent, homeboy has such a different steez - hooks pretty illy - next verse pretty ill, nothin awe inspiring, but pretty good

    not bad folkers!

    keep it movin!
    test
  8. EpicLipz

    EpicLipz New Member

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    word thanks holla holla yall
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  9. EpicLipz

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  10. D-Profit

    D-Profit Mr.Profit

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    it's iight , beat too , sad .. lol , but im feelin da verses and hook is good
    test
  11. EpicLipz

    EpicLipz New Member

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  12. SALVDOR

    SALVDOR Delyreeuz Owns Me

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    ight ... playin


    beat is solid



    quality is ehh.... could be better


    first kid.... not really diggin... the doubles are sloppy and the eq is overdone.... but mainly doubles are crap scheme is here and there.... could def be tightened up


    hook -... doesn't catch me.... i hear the hi's and the lo's.... which i guess is one of u... and the other... but just doesn't stand out u know


    verse 2 - sounds like the same person.... except... the double tragedy... flow is solid... but falls off here and there... scheme is pretty simple.... content... just isn't catchin me



    overall..... real sloppy... ends outta nowhere.... no real direction... and mixin is amature... u dig


    BUT... everyone can improve... so keep doin it
    test
  13. Mic-Dow

    Mic-Dow New Member

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    ouch!!! I sound like a chipmunk slowed down :( I here by hand in my resignation for rappin... peace y'all!!! ;)
    test
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