Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by Hard Target, Aug 4, 2006.
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Sinima is always nice... love this beat.
Flow is nice throughout,
Lyrics are tight, really cool ideas and concepts.
Delivery was pretty good, but I thought some parts in the first verse were a little hard to hear and a bit too quiet.
Third verse is my favorite... Flow and intensity really kicks in.
Really liked this song.
feed back if you want.
this shit deserves downloading.... very nice man check out my beats at www.mulingproductions.com if u wanna use any let me know email: email@example.com
great beat. Feeling the sample a lot. Voice is extremely ill. Lyrics are dope. Delivery is sick. The way you use the tone of your voice to deliver your lines is a huge thing for u. Nastyyyyyyyyyy shit. Sample on the hook is sick once again. I like how you play into it. ie: setup the line so it goes directly into the hook.
yeah this is dope, keep at it
get at my link - http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1001678
this fucker did 3 tracks in like 24 hours
all them are dope as fuck
you know what i think of em ht
downloaded.. and rated 9
-lyrics are good
-i have tons of yer songs on my computer thou too lol
-sample is real nice
return a listen:
thanx for the love yawll....and thanx to those who showed love on the page....BANG
hit my board up cock!!!!
Nice joint..im feelin the lyrics...I thought the last verse was def the best. But overall it was a good song coming from an artist. I esp like the way you transitioned from the verse to the hook. The only thing is that i thought the flow from the 3rd verse shouldve been done through all the verses...but the concept itself is what makes this a good track.. Sounded like you took your time too..
Now return trucker!
whats good HT, good to see you still doing your thing
this beat opens with a great sample im really feelin this
this story is dope, you really paint it well with these details
your flow on this is really nice
this reminds me of a cunninlynguist track, similar to missing children
"apparently she was a bad influence"
"baby raise a baby she had to get an abortion'
your swagger and lyrics on this work real well
you've def hit on 'target' here sorry couldnt help myself
i'm downloading this
stay up man
return the favor when you get a chance
Sinima is dope as fuck man. You have great flow/delivery/presence/lyrics/blahblah blah. Great song man, I`m downloading this. Good job on this.
Hmm had to come back to this thread and see what other people thought about this track and yall are SLEEPING? Sorry, but this is probably the best track Ive dl`d from RM in a long ass time. I havent really peeped many other tracks by you but this was dope.
Hmm. Dammit. You rocked that 'never leave me alone' beat.. I have a track for my mom over that same beat lol.
its fair to say u are impossible to get hold of now a days lol...
anyway lets take a listen see where my boy HTs at
wow this as calm as ive heard u in a minute...
damn homie.. your flow is absolutely ridiculous on this..."but lifes dark nothing was blacker than that apartment"
i love the sample on the hook.. and how u used it "baby raise a baby? she hadta get an abortion" jesus..."shes 17 grown up a child inside, couldnt tell the difference if u seen smile or cry"
u prolly could bump the levels on ya vocals up a lil dawg this story is dope.. as fuck and ya delivery and flow got me bobbin homie...hah finally a happy ending to one of these stories
to be honest easily one of the best tracks ive heard lately..
eh homie get at me on Aim or something imma leave a msg on ya board and shit i need one of those famous HT hooks and ive been tryna get at neek to get at you for a minute lol..
upping i got you k
Love the beat....Your voice has definitley improved alot...and your flow is improving too....Love the song concept...
Overall dope ass song
i wanted this beat for a minute ... this beat is hot couldnt dl it .. lol...
this is hot ...
you did this beat justice..
always comin wit that heat..
damn you on ur grind wit them plays .. oding fam ..
lol holla @ me
Shit is nice. Your music is crazy, good mixing on all your shit. Check my beats outhttp://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1002871
thanx for the love yawll....means alot
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