Born Brave Presents - Why Even Try It?

Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by L. Kross, Apr 4, 2013.

  1. L. Kross

    L. Kross His Highness

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    We get it poppin now, on ya block, lock it down
    We got em rockin from Brooklyn to Compton now
    Got a question? Hands up, money, put it on the ground
    Old habbits die hard, you know I gotta clown
    ..... But I aint kiddin man, Im serious now,
    I lay it down wit a sound you aint hear in a while
    ..... An I aint quittin now, Im bearin it out
    I aint doin it for me, Its for my girl an my child
    ..... So you know that Im drivin.....
    As pure as the new snow an twice as cold when you in it
    Coast to coast, have a toast for the chosen to win it
    Be careful, my flow cold, dont get frozen up in it
    Im in position just to rip em to ribbons an bows,
    You gone look like gift wrappin afta ya christmas is gone
    In a pile of trash, ripped, defiled an ravished.
    You try wit the baddest, splash in a river of chrome
    Im so cold, Lo sendin a shiver to bones
    Trust it take brains mixed wit pain to deliver the flow
    Cocaine slanger, bang like they did it in Blow
    Dough hangin from the roof like Juice an it dip to the floo
    ..... Whoa!.. Im just spittin the truth an it hurt,
    Lemme know, go an get in the booth an get murked
    Got em scared to where he stick to the roof of the church
    Cause Im the sargeant type, Kross court martial guys
    You the pip-squeaked, half-pint, quarter sized
    Hit ya block, the slaughter rise, everybody on it dies
    Anything to keep me from askin 'Did you order fries?'
    Movin quarter pies, boomin through like four to five
    An got it fortified, go an gettin more tonight
    Built an empire thats erected by drugs
    Connected by guns an protected by thugs
    Still we spit fire wit whats left in our lungs
    Im the best that it was til I get left in the dust
    ..... Test one, two, checkin em up
    The best in the midwest, just invest it in us
    ..... But what Im spittins fuckin crazy.....
    What Im spittins what Im livin, so my livin is amazin
    Shiftin in ya lane wit the pistons fuckin bangin
    Aint leavin rubber in the road, we rippin up the pavement
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  2. L. Kross

    L. Kross His Highness

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    I drop on em an stop forums
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  3. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    nice flow and pacing in this...built and written to be recorded. props on that.

    the content and actual floss and hype of this was meh...heard it all before and the actual literature merit was weak....don't take this as a dis, like I said this flow was hot, I really ping ponged through it.

    this is yet another swag and flow that fails to stand out imo...work on that and we got something memorable.
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  4. L. Kross

    L. Kross His Highness

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    Word I'm tryna make it tho u don't hear nothing memorable on the radio. Just flow an swag bein lyrical is just a waste of slick rhymes.
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  5. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    True. Still I try to find some fault with everything, my writing is a mess...you make a good point about radio being how it is. I guess we need to show them then.
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  6. L. Kross

    L. Kross His Highness

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    Yeah I wish we could make a change its a shame we have to pander to the lowest common denominator but I am getting good at it lol
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  7. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    The flow was dope. Content was okay. Common topic, tbh. I liked how throughout the verse you changed up your rhymesceme and style, showing your diversity. This would sound nice audio. over a beat that doesn't have too much going on. Maybe some quiet pauses here or there.
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  8. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    now this is real talk ...nice way to get it in nigga stay up
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