" Body Electric " Produced by Soul Theory Productions

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  1. ARIZCATZ

    ARIZCATZ Game Of Death

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    This is a hot track IL. I'm feeling the whole theme and how you painted the narrative. Your producer is on point here. Quality hiphop. Keep droppin heat like this.
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  2. littleslimlocc

    littleslimlocc New Member

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  3. Konseetid

    Konseetid ask about me

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    haven't heard this....

    beat is nice on it... like it... i like ya hook to... shyt nice

    ya delivery is beast... on that mellow vibe... flow is coo on this ... emotion is nice on this... like tha emphasis on certain words... you did ya thing on this first verse... fuccs wit it...

    second verse... ya content is nice on this verse also... don't think i mentioned that in tha first verse but yeah... i personally think witout tha delivery that you have this song wouldn't b tha song it was.. .lol... dumb statement but take it for what it is.. a compliment... but you also did real nice on this to

    i like this song as a whole... this shyt came out right... good shyt... dont' have no complaints...

    check me out fam..

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1049334
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  4. reincarnation

    reincarnation New Member

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    Dude, that was dope.
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  5. littleslimlocc

    littleslimlocc New Member

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    good lookin out
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  6. Halloween Jack

    Halloween Jack Heavens Demon

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    ha damn yo you've got some SHIT on ya sounkclick, duke.. good grief.

    that shit is dope as fuck.

    keep it up, yo, i like what you be spittin about.

    i just send you a friend request on soundclick btw..

    <------------Jack Lantern.

    howl at me...



    *ghosts*
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  7. nawshus

    nawshus STAMPEDE!

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    beat is nasty first off, props to soul theory.. man this is a smooth ass sample. heh this is a mad soft track but no hate, love is love. i think definitely the hook is sick, especially for a love joint. well done there legend. the verses are dope, i think i feeling the 2nd verse over the 1st. but both verses were nice.. man this sample is sick, good choice.. all in all dope track man.. hip hop for real. keep it up, thanks for the feedback.
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  8. mr.redeyez

    mr.redeyez Member

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    Yo Shyt O.k Not The Shyt Im Used To Bumpin It Aint Really Wut I Listen To But Keep Doin U Grind -n- Sihne
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  9. K dot aka LS

    K dot aka LS New Member

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    i like this man ...nice smooth feel

    i can relate to this....flow was pretty good...skill wise this was pretty good and as far as a song goes i give it about an 8/10

    no real complaints my dude this is nice

    keep droppin and thanks for the love
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  10. A.D. aka Alpine Demencia

    A.D. aka Alpine Demencia AlpyneProductions.com

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    nice shit fam... you on that mellow vibe hard... makes me wanna smokea blunt, lol

    keep grindin fam

    ..1..

    Alpyne
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  11. Revanon

    Revanon Comeback of the Year.

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    you don't have enough reviews? hahhahaha...kidding of course...

    Good vocal level...good flow...very old school...like 90's hiphop...I like the chorus..it's type funny though...hahahha..."do you remember that one night of LUUUUUVV....hahahha"

    If this song was on an album...it wouldn't be a single...probably a strong support.
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  12. T.T.P

    T.T.P TurnThePage

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    beat was aight...

    not my stlyle too much .. reminded of a mix between eyedea and slug..


    flow on point. conversation/story... stuck to theme well.... lyrics were solid though... delivery was poilished...

    good shit......


    please rtf:
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1049482
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  13. P-Kwut

    P-Kwut Tha Kid P

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    thx for hittin my link up yo.. this track is straight.. aint nothing wrong wit it.. flow n delivery hittin.. but the style of the track isnt somethin id usually listen to but none the less not a bad track.. pz homie
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  14. Mighty GK

    Mighty GK omg 2012

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    hm..verses are aight..beat is str8, but I just am not feeling this hook man. if u got a great singer to sing that shit it would have been a LOT better IMO...other than that u just need to work on spitting with a lil more emotion.

    pretty cool track though man..just keep working on this and it might pay off one day.
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