"BlackGirl"

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  1. Novaman: RaWKiLLa

    Novaman: RaWKiLLa New Member

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    BlackGirl

    Skin of coal, a heart of gold
    With teeth whiter than the virgin snow
    Soft as spider's silk but just as bold
    The length of my love--black girl do you know

    The texture of your hair doesn't matter
    Cause your curls are so beautiful to me
    Without you by my side my whole world would shatter
    Your love is the beach--my heart the sea

    Black girl you remind me of ice cream
    So many sweet flavors for me to choose
    To jump to the point, you're the girl of my dreams
    And I found in you--that dreams do come true

    The one who can piss me off and turn me on
    Black girl, you're still sexy with that attitude
    Rolling your eyes, cause you know ya the bomb
    And yet you can understand what I'm going through

    Your love makes me feel loose
    You're the essence of my very soul
    The blacker the berry, the sweeter the juice
    With skin of coal--a heart of gold
    test
  2. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    "Pure natural Beauty is true beauty" and this piece gave me some new found apreciation for that little quote. I loved the mets man they were really something special and it seems you are very fond of what is natural. Nice little piece well structured and written.


    Stay Up, much Love, Peace
    test
  3. TrufDXaggerator

    TrufDXaggerator New Member

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    Nice tribute to the sistas. U expressed yoself well nice flow and good wording.I remember u always come on some soulful tip.Nice Piece
    test
  4. Novaman: RaWKiLLa

    Novaman: RaWKiLLa New Member

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    I appreciate the comments.
    I'm just expressing my love for blackwomen...and women in general. Women period are beautiful with they enter into the womanhood properly. I just want to encourage women to be who they are and not change for nobody.
    test
  5. Black Liquid

    Black Liquid New Member

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    put it on a card its a wrap!
    test
  6. IvyG

    IvyG New Member

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    really nice flow.. nice job... <3
    test
  7. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Nicely Written piece

    one luv
    test
  8. Wicked5744

    Wicked5744 Last I awoke, it was morn

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    Black women do have that effect somethin wicked though don't they. Very nice drop here man. It's good to come back around and see a veteran hoppin back into some of this game. As the Ink flows...peace.
    test
  9. Den-S

    Den-S .:.The Chosen One.:.

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    wow this was dope...loved the imagery and detail...keep it up
    test
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