[BigJ] Vs EdgorAllenflow

Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by [BigJ], Apr 18, 2006.

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  1. [BigJ]

    [BigJ] New Member

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    `10-16 bars..
    due next 2-3 days...
    ready when u are
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  2. EdgarAllenFlow

    EdgarAllenFlow Punchlinestein

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    i'll drop soon
    friday at the latest
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  3. C.Thriller

    C.Thriller The boy

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  4. [BigJ]

    [BigJ] New Member

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    waitin/..
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  5. EdgarAllenFlow

    EdgarAllenFlow Punchlinestein

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    im calm in the clutch, but this kid's gay
    call me kobe bryant bc i'll hit the BigJ
    im rippin this kid, straight lickin my lips
    salivating can't wait to dig into his ribs
    if i said it, i meant it, destroy him
    he'll get drilled in the mouth like a dentist appointment
    this kid could be gayer, watch BigJ fall
    he's a switch hitter, but he doesn't play baseball
    you're an emotional dude, you better start to believe
    that my 44 will make you 'wear your heart on your sleeve'
    you wanted a battle, but not with me
    next time you spit, get up off your knees



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  6. [BigJ]

    [BigJ] New Member

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    i just got home today.so il drop l8er today..got shit to do..peace mayne
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  7. [BigJ]

    [BigJ] New Member

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    sunny..

    i be knew this shit..but i can see u miss hit..
    ul be killed with the millions like the next germen misfit..(Hitler=misfit)
    i aint never slackin..now watch this (Flow) fade..
    now take them crackass rhymes back across first grade..
    iv had it..im done with these new wankin fadin cats..
    u always bein (wacked) by men...and i aint talkin bout gangsters with bats..
    i aint even hurd of your crib..so who u gona impress..(Illadelph)..?
    writin that shit..u depressed..noone gona rescue this damsil in destress..
    `Allen` be a strait fake mc..whos fallin face first..
    u'z like an old lady runnin..trying to catch the boi with your perse..(aint happenin)
    one day il be a star..and ul be lookin back on this..
    its like being a no name looser..was always your first wish...
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  8. @zrael

    @zrael New Member

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    niether one was anything special. both mediocre verses. the first cat won just cause his was less wack. not cause it was tight.

    EdgarAllenFlow
    "call me Kobe Bryant bc i'll hit the BigJ" - wackest line of the year. too simple and corny

    BigJ
    overall if you have to put an explanation every 3 lines (Hitler=misfit) then you're reaching. some people won't be able to get punchlines for a minute if they're clever. but that was forced and just weak. you lost because while EAF was wack he wasn't AS wack.

    oh...and Illadelph is Philly...aka Philadelphia.
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  9. [BigJ]

    [BigJ] New Member

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    i aint no american...u gave alot of usless feed..but some helped..peace
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  10. @zrael

    @zrael New Member

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    i hear you. but you're a hip hop fan right? you ever heard of the roots? or eve? or slum village? or beanie segal? they all rep Philly and have said "Illadelph" in they're rhymes before. either way...my point was that just because YOU don't know doesn't mean THE MAJORITY of people don't. so that takes some strength away from that line.

    and the other thing was that if you're trying too hard then it comes off as forced instead of clever. maybe the ideas are good in theory but try wording them more cleverly to get the point across. cause then you'll have people on some "oh shit...i get it...i see what he's trying to say...that shit is hot" instead of "man...did he really need to put an explanation for every other line?"

    that's all. take it how you take it man.

    peace.
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  11. [BigJ]

    [BigJ] New Member

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    aight..~1~
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  12. theezy

    theezy New Member

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    @zrael"s Raelly Said It All,hey I"m African N Ma Lines Are Tighter Than That.u Need To Listen More,to Folow More
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  13. Nu'maaN

    Nu'maaN Anu'naki, Nuqqa.

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    my vote goes to EdgarAllenFlow ...

    he had a better flow ...
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  14. Erokladon

    Erokladon New Member

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    EAF

    came with it way harder his lines hit harder, although some lines on both sides were so-so

    EAF gets my vote..
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  15. [BigJ]

    [BigJ] New Member

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    k..now i need another battle..anyone down?
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  16. EdgarAllenFlow

    EdgarAllenFlow Punchlinestein

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    uppin for more votes/ constructive critisism
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