Better days to come - Dilz

Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by FxTDiilz, May 5, 2013.

  1. FxTDiilz

    FxTDiilz Member

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    I have just uploaded a new song called "Better Days to Come" that talks about drug addiction, teen pregnancy and drink driving. In the verse about drink driving I talk about my mate from school and also another girl being killed in an accident so yea the song is very real.

    Please give it a listen, comment your thoughts and whatever else lol

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QX1O_Hw6-00
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  2. FxTDiilz

    FxTDiilz Member

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  3. MC Devious

    MC Devious New Member

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    You should've put the link in the message, it was easy to find but some people on here are lazy. Ok returning the favor here, I like the message man. Your lyricism is on point like a mug and I like the flow a whole lot, think you tried to throw too many words in on some of the lines though. I think I would've edited a few of those lines down just a bit so it flowed better but besides that this is completely on point. Really liked the hook man.
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  4. FxTDiilz

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    thank you for returning feedback bro. I didn't realise I didn't put the link in lol. Like a mug? haha. thank you, yea looking at the song now I realise i crammed some words in but it's something I just have to keep working on lol, I've only just started rapping lol. and was a bit worried bout the hook as I'm not a singer but people seem to like it lol.
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  5. Juice Box Beatz

    Juice Box Beatz www.JuiceBeats.com

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    this songs real as fuck bro. great job putting this song together. great message. flow was on point for the most part. beats pretty sick and the hooks ill. if u wanna add me on facebook id like 2 hear more music from u in the future.
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  6. FxTDiilz

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    Hey bro thank you for the feedback it means a lot. I have heaps of meaningful songs like this uploaded to my youtube. I tried adding you on facebook but it only gave me the option to message to your "other" inbox or follow you. I did post this song in your status about the hook though. could you please come over and like my facebook fan page? www.facebook.com/DilzMusic .
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