behind...very possible my best piece ever..

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  1. PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT

    PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT New Member

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    I am gonna record this..but you seriously need the beat...to feel it betta..

    http://artists.mp3s.com/artist_song/3197/3197317.html


    the dude who made is really brilliant..auditory...


    anyways...

    Jewels amongst foos…shinin trough the night in between you…
    You dont see truth… fightin for your life starin trough the rearvieuw…
    Where life pass..pressed against the glass hexin people where they cant hear you…
    And they’ll never near you with yer ugly character and features…
    Twitchy moves reveal ya..lookin sheisty scared but evil…
    evadin the light …you’ve grown a hatefull little creature…
    Concealed deep in hiddin secrets…more lonely then a shogun…
    Considdered mother natures feces…by these kids…
    in these blocks where ya childhood wuz stolen…
    parents dont want you near their kids..scared that they’ll catch it…
    eyes and cheeks swolen………ears still echo… get away you ugly maggot..
    in dark hidden from the day safely stashed away…wishin you could get em…
    And the dream is dark for the gettin..the feelin is creatin its own settings…
    Hate and self pitty marry… and right there a murderer is born…
    A promising soul scorned…life to bring death ridiculed insteada mourned…
    Growin on Locked and stored plottin death behind closed doors…
    Consumin his soul is whut its made for…plannin against me..
    And very possibly you…I keep a close eye to defend me..
    See he lives behind walls seein light scarcely …cuz he hates but fears you…
    Livin inside..bullies…cops..and maybe a wordleader near you…
    test
  2. Intellekt

    Intellekt Funky

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    ill shit rupert..needed it explained it to me but once u did it was even iller..hit me up when its audio foo. paaaayce
    test
  3. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    I was feeling this piece and I feel as if the beat helped out the whole feel to it. That's what people should really use in their text piece or might as well record it themselves, which I'll be doing quite soon. I thought of it as being of truth and knowledge, it really influenced me to write on different topics within my creative mind to the pen. Thank you for giving me a reason tonight to write. My blessings..
    test
  4. PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT

    PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT New Member

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    thanx dukes... and I will record it next time I have the time too..

    tuned..I'm happy I got you thinkin...thass whut its for..lol it might not have been the thing I had in mind...but shit..it hit ground...and thass good...
    test
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