BEAT UPDATE FROM STR8-N-NarrOw PRODUCTIONs

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  1. premise

    premise Timeless

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    HERE FOR 3 BEAT UPDATE

    "Prisoners Journey"--me doin what i do best
    "The JUnction"- experimented wit a new style, new sounds
    "They dont know..."-- mix of old style and new sounds

    all feed returned no doubt

    Peace>PreM
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  2. premise

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  3. pred

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    prisoners journeys nice, the junctions its ok it sounds kinda weird. the other one was ok didnt sound really my type tho. there good tho mane stay up.
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  4. premise

    premise Timeless

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    no doubt, thx for the thoughts
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  5. Koach

    Koach rm takes it up the ass

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    Prisoner's Journey
    -Bass is distorting and overpowering the other sounds a little. If that's what you want, no criticism from me. Not bad. Seems like you filled the emptiness with reverb.

    "The Junction"
    -This has a few melodies going on in the beginning-not crazy about them, but it has something going on. Good percussion work. Not bad, just doesn't grab me-probably just needs a lyricist.

    "They Don't Know the Half"
    -Not crazy about the piano melody. Bass is nice and full. Drum is different, but.....

    PEACE
    Koach
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  6. premise

    premise Timeless

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    good look koach
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  7. Blocc_Rocc

    Blocc_Rocc New Member

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    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=814319
    return the love

    the prison joint was pretty nice...real dark and crazy...was feelin it

    THe junction is pretty cool....sound like it needs some better mixing.....the percussion is sick tho....nice bass too....this one is pretty good

    The last one is cool....not really into the melody....its a str8 beat tho...nice bass again
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  8. premise

    premise Timeless

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    im peepin that link now, good look
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  9. Blocc_Rocc

    Blocc_Rocc New Member

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    yo when u get time go back and peep the top beat...id appreciate it
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  10. premise

    premise Timeless

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    aight, i got u
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  11. ShadowPump

    ShadowPump Neck Therapist, M.D.

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    k peepin first one---tight intro........nice drums in the drop unique stuff, nice creepy vibe...im likin this, tight stuff

    junction---k wierd sounds wierd medoldy i kinda like it but that intrus violin sounding thing kinda throws it off, u def were goin for some pharell here lol not quite there but good idea-

    they don know-k intersting koto soundin thing-nice drums on this one good work

    k pz favor returned-
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  12. DTSXplosive

    DTSXplosive New Member

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    I was feelin You can. Definitely a club beat. You have more of an underground style which is a little different than mine but you doin your thing!
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  13. Maestro Minded

    Maestro Minded Conductin The Orchestra

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    returning favor

    Prisoners Journey - this is uhm.. strange... im not really feeling the voices, but the melody is cool, its like you've mixed two melodies into one though, something sounds strange, im not really feelin that kick
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  14. Malabu

    Malabu LEX-TOWN 859

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    retrunin favors, ur beats are nice, and different, good, ur drums overall are good, keep workin keep droppin
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  15. MagickB3ats

    MagickB3ats Owns

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    I seriously aint' feelin' that tag, and that kick BANGS!! Like a mother. And that drum line is simply incredible, 9/10. Feelin' kinda generous since all posts today have been either a 9/10 or a 10/10... good job either way.

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=814379
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  16. Soopa of I.M.E.

    Soopa of I.M.E. New Member

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    returnin' the feed son....

    i peeped all 3...2 & 3 were really not my steez, but i admire the concepts.....so i end up feelin' the 1st one most...my only gripe was with the drums....kick needed to hit harder and i'd take that reverb off that snare....but that's opinion not gospel son...other than that, it was a banger to me...

    keep it up man...

    -Soopa-
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  17. AmeN2002

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    Prisoner's Journey-pretty nice....seems empty in sum parts tho...tha choir voice is nice...strings r pretty dope...overall nice...

    The Junction-percussion is soundin nice....that snare is weak not feelin that...i would layer it more...melody got a good twist on me tho....overall dope mang..


    They don't know the half-this is not my steez at all...drums need more compression on them...keep it up tho...nice job...
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  18. MajorBeats4MCs

    MajorBeats4MCs Making Dollars

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    THe Prisoners Journey is real grimey some hard shit.
    The Junction is cool I like the bassline, I dont like the synth line, the drums are nice though, Im feelin them.

    peep my thread when you get a chance
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=814392
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  19. Raticus

    Raticus Beatz for the streetz....

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    Not too bad.... Listened to few of dem jointz on ya page...For the most part I like what I am hearing.... Minor adjustments with mix and arrangement choices.....

    Keep em comin....

    Raticus
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  20. premise

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    no doubt yall, thx for all the feed

    Peace>PreM
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