Be With Me - Over the bobby valintino beat - TELL ME

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  1. UpgrAde

    UpgrAde tha absent minded

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  2. UpgrAde

    UpgrAde tha absent minded

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    a lil over 2 mins ....thats all im askin
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    UpgrAde tha absent minded

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    bUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUMp jism
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  4. Tha Artful Scrybe

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    yeah, gettin slept on sucks balls...

    listenin:
    like the flow on this, voice is cool...could be a li'l more prominent, in other werds, maybe a little more presence...hook is nice...needs to stand out a little more tho, i can see people rockin that shit...coulda ended the track a li'l better, but other than that, solid post...keep spittin...


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  5. UpgrAde

    UpgrAde tha absent minded

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    ^^yea i layerd this song, i usually dont do it, but for some reason i wanted to do it for this track
    and i didnt really make this for someone....but i kept in mind the good times i had with my ex and someone im 'talkin to' now....
    i wanted to make a love song most people would feel, and put a love song out for a cut on the album, somethin people could vibe too
    i have made a song for someone, but i didnt feel like it could be an album cut cuz the stuff was too personal, and a lot of inside things that most peopel would be confused about

    thanx a lot for the break down

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  7. Dabatos

    Dabatos C.hris S.ean D.abatos

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    immma listen to it rite now...

    oh shyt very nice beat... the lyrics is bad.. the beat seems sorta too loud.. but ur flow is good.. delivery is pretty good..

    the chorus is very good..

    2nd verse in the begining is nice.. the flow here is really good.. really feelin the verse... the lyrics has good emotion n try to show a little more emotion.. jst a little moer..

    chorus once agen n luvin it..

    overall a dope piece right here man.. much props..

    rtf please..

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=910029
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  13. UpgrAde

    UpgrAde tha absent minded

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    movin on up
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  14. UpgrAde

    UpgrAde tha absent minded

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    ^yo that sounds familiar....whats that from....? o yea YOU QUOTED THE JEFFERSONS!
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    UpgrAde tha absent minded

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    "new track here" - eturnal
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  16. FrozD

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    returnin favor... shits cool man, flow and delivery straight, beat is coo, could use a lil polishin on the deliv... lyrics straight, hook isnt bad... overall track is cool man, decent listen here, diggin it man, get at the kid, holla
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