BBoys/PR Vs. RM - Charles Vs. Sur

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  1. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    BBoys Vs. RM

    Line Limit - 16-20 Lines, More If Agreed Upon

    Due Date - Next SUNDAY - 02/26/06

    VOTING:

    We're gonna try to keep this as fair as possible. If your votes aren't explained (i.e. 'So-And-So was better, BECAUSE... So-And-So lost, BECAUSE... MAKE SURE YOU GIVE REASONS!), they won't be counted. Everyone is welcomed to vote, as long as they follow the rules, otherwise don't waste our time.

    RULE:

    You may use your opponents picture to diss AS LONG AS HE AGREES. It also would be common courtesy to give him your pic in exchange.

    pz.
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  2. Sur*5*ILL

    Sur*5*ILL Kangs

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    AIM - SGpimp 5


    If You Want To Do the Pic Thang. Hawller.
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  3. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    In. Ill hit you up about pics.
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  4. Sur*5*ILL

    Sur*5*ILL Kangs

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    We're Going 24.
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  5. U S E R

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  6. Sur*5*ILL

    Sur*5*ILL Kangs

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    Roflz. Good Luck.



    You’re sooo conceited… it’s a vain need for pecs to flinch;
    But, Charles is the only nig to say cheese and flex his chin;
    Express chagrin… your torso is a massive flat lack of flesh;
    LMAO @ her rack and the fact ya rocking matching chests;
    You’re not having sex, just judging from these vibes of hers;
    The only time you slid in a Snatch you had to rewind it first;
    You’re looking sick and pale, Limey faggot, this kid is frail;
    Fuck a haymaker, one tap creates brews and the British ales;
    I’m sick of this fag, his road to success has a significant snag;
    In UK…all y’all got is left drivers like Phil Mickelson’s bag;
    Still kickin his ass; I got braids & he envies, scorns & scowls;
    Took a pic & 1-upped me showing he can cornrow his brows;
    Holy cow! them shits are thick, plz shave them gaudy thangs;
    Nigga raised his eyebrows…so they’re tame & potty-trained;
    Who’s ya personal trainer? he performs tasks I’d fast relish;
    He works well; That 6-pack on your chin got my abs jealous;
    & you’re a past relic, I peeped RBL & PBA and compared it;
    so you can recycle from PR cuz I haven’t registered there yet;
    Ya dickless, you don’t do missionary so quit the persistence;
    Only people EVER under Chuck Daly are Piston’s assistants;
    Whipped in an instant; Bboys? A site of which I never heard;
    But I’m pretty sure it refers to the chicks’ cup size they prefer;
    Naysayers say I lost my luster…though I crushed C abruptly;
    & I’m still not at my cusp’s peak, but if I’m rusty, what’s he?




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  7. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    i dont know how u hit that duke..

    most bitches is gold-diggers, wont fuck less u get 'em a neckless,
    so i respect that ya girl look like she always been down... syndrome affected
    and tell me.. what up with the oil spread on her face?
    when she walked in, THAT Grease grossed more than the one filmed in 78'
    I do feel those glasses tho.. but not cause they crazy trendy
    but cause i'd tint them shits too if i ever had to look at that hoes face directly
    i mean damn! how you hit that? dawg, forreal thats sickly
    aint seen a shyne make peeps run like that in a club since he last chilled with diddy
    not kiddin', i dont think a trademark is why the colons at the end are present
    its just that even ya text verses are fuckin squintin at her forehead reflectin'
    now i KNOW you ain't hard.. haha, bitch talkin emotions & u wine'n'squeel,
    .. one word from ya girl and you ‘turn a touch sensitive’, like the ipod wheel
    fuck a fight, homo, i guarentee you never stuck up ya fists
    only time ida seen ya bob'n'weave is when you're suckin a dick
    ya goatee's gay, it dont show you a man cause its lined out best
    only thing it explains is where the hair that was between ya eyebrows went
    damn you two look similar.. dogg, did ya really have to date her
    cause now we gotta Caeser fuckin his sister, like the bad guy in gladiator
    bet she does anything u want; cook, work, plus cleanin ya clothes
    its like shes bin putty in your hands.. & then you punched the bitch in the nose
    your scrawney as FUCK, theres noone you're harder then
    forget a pencil neck.. your shit looks more like a sharpening
    theres no way you two are black, but i will say that you're cute
    cuz its clear u both love sick
    .. since it looks like u met at a kidney failure support group

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  8. TyrantTMABM

    TyrantTMABM registered to shit on u

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    ooh. hot battle. both verses had some funny shit. both had good punches. both were kind of hard to follow in some places. i think sur got this one though. his verse was funnier than charles'. thats pretty much all that was better though.

    v/Sur.
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  9. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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    OMG! This is going to be crazy...
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  10. Phryme

    Phryme lets get it.

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    ya goatee's gay, it dont show you a man cause its lined out best
    only thing it explains is where the hair that was between ya eyebrows went

    ^LMAO. wow.
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  11. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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    survival got this.


    sur had some funny lines, consistent flow.. the whole 9 yards.

    charles wasnt bad, that opener was played tho. Lines stretched as well, grease one was ok.
    tho, this line was pretty coo--
    ya goatee's gay, it dont show you a man cause its lined out best
    only thing it explains is where the hair that was between ya eyebrows went


    but sur had

    Holy cow! them shits are thick, plz shave them gaudy thangs;
    Nigga raised his eyebrows…so they’re tame & potty-trained;
    Who’s ya personal trainer? he performs tasks I’d fast relish;
    He works well; That 6-pack on your chin got my abs jealous;

    nice seg


    Whipped in an instant; Bboys? A site of which I never heard;
    But I’m pretty sure it refers to the chicks’ cup size they prefer;

    ^ funny

    what i got here is sur over alot with flow & wording. Where as the pic clowning/ punches etc went to sur by a lesser margin.
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  12. Strike

    Strike packin that metal

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    Hmm pretty dope match... neither uses a/the style I prefer but thats probably cause Im pretty fuckin stuck in the past....but I think from get go its easy to see whos the better writer as a whole... and thats sur.. the structure of the verse the flow set ups to punches all by milage to sur.. charles shit was pretty choppy written and stuff
    up to content tho... sur was a lot more original and less corny but a bit less entertaining then charles...to me anyway... with sur I was like wow nice concept but I never felt like it was a hard line impact wise...charles had that slightly more...then again charles was also really inconsistent with some shitty lines... so all in all I have to still give it to sur mostly on writer skills and consistency and ofcourse a few entertaining lines such as the chin lines...
    pretty good showin by charles jus not good enough

    vote sur
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  13. Sidneh Bihar

    Sidneh Bihar New Member

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    Roflz. Good Luck.



    You’re sooo conceited… it’s a vain need for pecs to flinch;
    But, Charles is the only nig to say cheese and flex his chin;
    ^Dumb

    Express chagrin… your torso is a massive flat lack of flesh;
    LMAO @ her rack and the fact ya rocking matching chests;
    ^Coo

    You’re not having sex, just judging from these vibes of hers;
    The only time you slid in a Snatch you had to rewind it first;
    ^Decent

    You’re looking sick and pale, Limey faggot, this kid is frail;
    Fuck a haymaker, one tap creates brews and the British ales;
    ^Clever

    I’m sick of this fag, his road to success has a significant snag;
    In UK…all y’all got is left drivers like Phil Mickelson’s bag;
    ^I like it

    Still kickin his ass; I got braids & he envies, scorns & scowls;
    Took a pic & 1-upped me showing he can cornrow his brows;
    ^Ok

    Holy cow! them shits are thick, plz shave them gaudy thangs;
    Nigga raised his eyebrows…so they’re tame & potty-trained;
    ^Funny

    Who’s ya personal trainer? he performs tasks I’d fast relish;
    He works well; That 6-pack on your chin got my abs jealous;
    ^Wack

    & you’re a past relic, I peeped RBL & PBA and compared it;
    so you can recycle from PR cuz I haven’t registered there yet;
    ^Nice

    Ya dickless, you don’t do missionary so quit the persistence;
    Only people EVER under Chuck Daly are Piston’s assistants;
    ^His name is Charles

    Whipped in an instant; Bboys? A site of which I never heard;
    But I’m pretty sure it refers to the chicks’ cup size they prefer;
    ^Garbage

    Naysayers say I lost my luster…though I crushed C abruptly;
    & I’m still not at my cusp’s peak, but if I’m rusty, what’s he?
    ^Good

    Good flow. Direct attack. Chin lines sucked. I assume Chuck is short for Charles so I'll give you partial credit. b-boy lines are played all the way out yuck.







    i dont know how u hit that duke..

    most bitches is gold-diggers, wont fuck less u get 'em a neckless,
    so i respect that ya girl look like she always been down... syndrome affected
    ^Ehh...

    and tell me.. what up with the oil spread on her face?
    when she walked in, THAT Grease grossed more than the one filmed in 78'
    ^Played

    I do feel those glasses tho.. but not cause they crazy trendy
    but cause i'd tint them shits too if i ever had to look at that hoes face directly
    ^Great

    i mean damn! how you hit that? dawg, forreal thats sickly
    aint seen a shyne make peeps run like that in a club since he last chilled with diddy
    ^Funny

    not kiddin', i dont think a trademark is why the colons at the end are present
    its just that even ya text verses are fuckin squintin at her forehead reflectin'
    ^Nice

    now i KNOW you ain't hard.. haha, bitch talkin emotions & u wine'n'squeel,
    .. one word from ya girl and you ‘turn a touch sensitive’, like the ipod wheel
    ^Cool

    fuck a fight, homo, i guarentee you never stuck up ya fists
    only time ida seen ya bob'n'weave is when you're suckin a dick
    ^Wack

    ya goatee's gay, it dont show you a man cause its lined out best
    only thing it explains is where the hair that was between ya eyebrows went
    ^Hilarious

    damn you two look similar.. dogg, did ya really have to date her
    cause now we gotta Caeser fuckin his sister, like the bad guy in gladiator
    ^No

    bet she does anything u want; cook, work, plus cleanin ya clothes
    its like shes bin putty in your hands.. & then you punched the bitch in the nose
    ^Nah

    your scrawney as FUCK, theres noone you're harder then
    forget a pencil neck.. your shit looks more like a sharpening
    ^Hell no

    theres no way you two are black, but i will say that you're cute
    cuz its clear u both love sick
    .. since it looks like u met at a kidney failure support group
    ^Awful


    Had some funny lines esp. the eyebrow line. Some lines were terrible and bad pic disses for the most part. This could go either way cos although he didn't have as played lines as you, his lines weren't as good as yours but in the end he was more consistent.

    v/Sur.
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  14. ~M Blaze~

    ~M Blaze~ ....grapes.....

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    You’re not having sex, just judging from these vibes of hers;
    The only time you slid in a Snatch you had to rewind it first;

    Ya dickless, you don’t do missionary so quit the persistence;
    Only people EVER under Chuck Daly are Piston’s assistants;
    Whipped in an instant; Bboys? A site of which I never heard;
    But I’m pretty sure it refers to the chicks’ cup size they prefer;
    Naysayers say I lost my luster…though I crushed C abruptly;
    & I’m still not at my cusp’s peak, but if I’m rusty, what’s he?

    Yo... This shit was all dope from Sur.... Thought the flow picked up a lot towards the end...A lot of the Pic disses were corny though holmes... Eyebrow shit was weak to me... good verse though...lets see how Wasta did

    Charles Spit~


    most bitches is gold-diggers, wont fuck less u get 'em a neckless,
    so i respect that ya girl look like she always been down... syndrome affected
    and tell me.. what up with the oil spread on her face?
    when she walked in, THAT Grease grossed more than the one filmed in 78'
    I do feel those glasses tho.. but not cause they crazy trendy
    but cause i'd tint them shits too if i ever had to look at that hoes face directly
    ^^^^
    This was ILL forreal...

    ya goatee's gay, it dont show you a man cause its lined out best
    only thing it explains is where the hair that was between ya eyebrows went
    ^^^
    lol....thats a better eyebrow line...

    bet she does anything u want; cook, work, plus cleanin ya clothes
    its like shes bin putty in your hands.. & then you punched the bitch in the nose


    Damn.... This shit is close.... I quoted everything i like.... Sur had better flow I thought, but Wasta had slightly better punches...I dunno i need to look back and count up the wack lines... who ever has more wack shit losses ok... hold up...

    Wack Shit from Sur:

    You’re looking sick and pale, Limey faggot, this kid is frail;
    Fuck a haymaker, one tap creates brews and the British ales;

    ~ I Know Charles is from England and shit... but this line was weak to me...

    I’m sick of this fag, his road to success has a significant snag;
    In UK…all y’all got is left drivers like Phil Mickelson’s bag;
    ~ eeehhhh cares...thought this was weak.....

    Wack Shit from Wasta~

    your scrawney as FUCK, theres noone you're harder then
    forget a pencil neck.. your shit looks more like a sharpening

    damn you two look similar.. dogg, did ya really have to date her
    cause now we gotta Caeser fuckin his sister, like the bad guy in gladiator

    Aww man.... i dont fucking know.... this is close as hell.... but i got to go one way....

    Flow and Structure= Sur
    Punches= Wasta (but the best ones were about his girl and not him)

    SO

    Vote= Sur....

    it was pretty much even but i always sway to who i think rhymes better...and had nicer flow...
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  15. BlakkOut

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    good fuckin battle

    i see everybody got sur winning...but umm i dont quite see it that way

    charles's pic disses were more creative and his verse seemed to be more directed at his opponent...sur had the wordplay hittin...but some of that shit was more swing and a miss in my opinion...charles had some wack lines but his nice bars really made me laugh out loud...sur's verse was good...but nothin really had me go "damn"

    most bitches is gold-diggers, wont fuck less u get 'em a neckless,
    so i respect that ya girl look like she always been down... syndrome affected
    and tell me.. what up with the oil spread on her face?
    when she walked in, THAT Grease grossed more than the one filmed in 78'
    I do feel those glasses tho.. but not cause they crazy trendy
    but cause i'd tint them shits too if i ever had to look at that hoes face directly

    this is all ill...started out blazin from the jump

    these bars...the eyebrows shit, and putty in his hands lines were bangers

    sur had some shit tho

    Holy cow! them shits are thick, plz shave them gaudy thangs;
    Nigga raised his eyebrows…so they’re tame & potty-trained;
    Who’s ya personal trainer? he performs tasks I’d fast relish;
    He works well; That 6-pack on your chin got my abs jealous

    but some lines...even tho charles is from overseas...the left drivers line was funny...but it didnt hit hard at all...as well as the British ales line

    I got Charles takin this battle for a more direct and harder hittin verse

    Vote-Charles...take it or leave it
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  16. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    lol this shit is funny

    cuz you cant tell at all who just registered from bboys and pr, lol
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  17. Charles

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    if anything in the whole world is funny its you, headless.
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  18. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    i dont even KNOW who is from bboys, with feb registration dates and 4 posts, ignoring every funny sur line voting for charles, NOT AT ALL
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  19. Charles

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    Yes ok headless, go shave your head.
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  20. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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    yeah, calm down Headless, one of the votes for Sur. was from ••••••. And I honestly have no idea who Blakkout is..let's try to keep this clean.

    if someone can delete all of these back and forths, as well as my post, that'd be great.
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