!!!Battle Scar Patterns!!!NEW!!LEAVE LINKS!!

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  1. Cheez

    Cheez New Member

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    this song is called battle scar patterns: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=51132

    Beat: Stoupe

    to cut it short, i know my breath control was off. i had 10min. left in the studio and all i wanted to do was kill the mic. hate it or love it leave a link and i will give your tracks feedback. [vilewalk]
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  3. Cheez

    Cheez New Member

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    Thanx for your feed back My feedback should be on your thread [turn]
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  4. Atom React

    Atom React aka JAYO

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    beats different.. not sure if i feel it yet, yeah i do, its somethin i aint heard before i can feel this, ya voice is ight you sound like you'd fit in with underground heads like cage, copywrite, the whole smut peddlers, not that thats bad. ya flow is pretty good, it falls off at points an shit, and your delivery at times doesnt really match how id approach it, you aint soundin to bad tho, with some work you can hold down some underground shit, your voice aint that bad of a listen, stay up homi
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  5. mat2crack

    mat2crack New Member

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    i think it wasnt bad, im lovin the beat, off that new JMT album, lyrics were pretty good, title holds up to it, i think this has potential to be a serious track, i would suggest to try to spit more into the pocket of the beat, keep it up!


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  6. Cheez

    Cheez New Member

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    thanx for the feedback everyone
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  7. Edicius

    Edicius Escrituras presionadas

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  8. Cheez

    Cheez New Member

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    thanx for the feedback man, i posted my response to your thread so it should be there!!
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  9. Alphabetical

    Alphabetical Superstar Producer

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    Nice job, Send me those JMT intst!
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  10. Cheez

    Cheez New Member

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    I would but i just bought the CD and looped the beats in cool edit and i dont have just the inst. saved.
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  11. killa_bone

    killa_bone New Member

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    returning the favour... nice beat, very nice - you got a cool voice, nice lyrics, flow, pretty rugged track, you rip the beat, could make some sick stories up and make them deep i reckon. good shit man
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  12. Cheez

    Cheez New Member

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    aigt thanx for returning the favor
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  13. FeAr LeSs

    FeAr LeSs New Member

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    first verse tight beat nice, you kinda fell off on spots keep it up
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  14. Cardo

    Cardo Im Extra Scary

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    quality is good.. what are you talking about ? ya voice is cool I like ya delivery an shit, the beat is cool, I wouldnt rock this cuz its not ma steeze but its cool.. hook is ight if that is a hook lol. but yea lyrics is mad random on some abstract shit lol

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=950495
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  15. Cheez

    Cheez New Member

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    thanx for the reply, my response should be on your thread
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  16. Jaiz

    Jaiz JaizMusic.com

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    That's a hot beat. You got a pretty cool vocal presence, and a pretty unique rhyme scheme. Your flow was onpoint but fell off at points, but good for the most part. You got some nice lyrics. I agree with others ur style is very underground. I think ya got a lot of potential. Keep droppin!

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  17. Cheez

    Cheez New Member

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    thanx for the feed...I replied to your post it should be there
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