***battle Profit C vs Yung Wiz***

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  1. Sir Bustalot

    Sir Bustalot I am Jesus

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    10-16 lines

    first to five votes wins

    explain your votes or they will not count

    verses due sunday at 12 midnight.....you post late you forfeit.
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  2. Profit C

    Profit C New Member

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    says he's a young wiz so I'll call him a smart guy
    probably a look-a-like, apartheid
    I had nothing so I just said anything
    at least I won't do it for my whole verse like this dairy queen
    yea I said it, and in a free I would have stutterd
    but it'd still be smooth like butter, while ya flow would be all muttered
    cluttered like ya girl's puss, take a look at how the world looks
    without this clown, I see it, now the world not shook
    cause the bad influence has been tooken out
    hey smart guy! why are you're teeth crooked now?
    you walked the straight and narrow but got punched in the face
    smart guys always get their lunch in their face
    I'm done with this ace, reason i call you that
    is your number 1 is everything that nobody wants in fact
    you're whack and I don't even think that you'll drop
    and if you do, smart guys wear big shoes, so you'll definate flop

    peace...
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  3. YuNg WiZ

    YuNg WiZ aka L.O.G.I.C.

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    smart guy? nigga your name is profit c
    how u gonna profit cents or copy hi-c
    I dunno why I'm even gonna come at you hard
    but there's a punishment for tryna embarrass da god
    you chasin a street dream, you must be a dickfiend
    cause u ridin mine like it's a monster ball scene
    I'm sorry this clown had to come and waste up a spot
    coulda givin it to 2xtreme at least it woulda been hot
    the misguided nobody versus the popular stranger
    and unfortunately this stranger got some pent up anger
    you ain't even touchin the wiz so lemme perform my magic
    now poof and disappear, you musta prophecized this tragic
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  4. MC-Panther

    MC-Panther New Member

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    profit c ....

    you walked the straight and narrow but got punched in the face
    smart guys always get their lunch in their face
    I'm done with this ace, reason i call you that
    is your number 1 is everything that nobody wants in fact

    this was your hardest hitting little segment.. overall your verse was alright but kinda weak..nothing to special


    yung wiz

    I dunno why I'm even gonna come at you hard
    but there's a punishment for tryna embarrass da god

    i like this line even though its plain it fits in nice with your verse..

    your closer was sick too except for the last word but overall your verse was pretty good


    profit c in my eyes gets a 4.5/10
    yung wiz in my eyes gets a 5/10

    overall it was an ok battle but yung wiz just came a litttttle tiny bit better in my opinion , al though it was madddd close
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  5. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    Profit-C— Man You came wit it, I like this piece right here....I chuckled...
    Nice drop...



    Young Wiz

    you came wit more attitude...like that in you....so you get me vote.....

    vote-YW
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  6. This line got me.

    It flowed a bit smoother, and seemed to have a better structure, with more thought put into it then Wiz's verse.

    VOTE - Profit C
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  7. Profit C

    Profit C New Member

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    This is my win...no matta what....believe that....

    and no I'm not getting votes or giving to get.peace.1
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  8. YuNg WiZ

    YuNg WiZ aka L.O.G.I.C.

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    shit if u win congrats...with all due respect I'm far from a battle emcee, nowhere close to one
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  9. da finisha

    da finisha PUNCH LINE KING~~~~~

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    um young wiz had more werd play like wen u made fun of his name
    profit it was horrible that butter and muttered line threw me of
    punches and flow young wizz
    vote - young wizz
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  10. barnizzle

    barnizzle HIP HOP

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    vote = young wiz.....by a lil bit

    proft c still had a nice piece
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  11. Linxz

    Linxz What!

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    and unfortunately this stranger got some pent up anger....lmao

    if that was a personal about pent up it came off smooth

    and yea young came off decent in this drop but not like he would if he put time into it!

    vote=wiz
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  12. da finisha

    da finisha PUNCH LINE KING~~~~~

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    dis one is a wap rite here lol
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  13. YuNg WiZ

    YuNg WiZ aka L.O.G.I.C.

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    Wiz wit the win....and as far the pent up thing...I'm holding my peace
    won't say nuthin
    everything i needed to say right now has been said
    that's sumtin for a rainy day
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  14. Profit C

    Profit C New Member

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    uhh..i would congratulate you but I don't think you won....but anyway...maybe we'll meet again...peace......
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  15. Sir Bustalot

    Sir Bustalot I am Jesus

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    yung wiz=winner
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