Battle of the Unknowns..Hatred:..vs:..CSmart1

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  1. Hatred

    Hatred 9-2 6KO'S

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    10-12 lines
    no biting or feeding off each others verse
    3-0 KO or 1st to 5 votes wins​
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  2. CmartOne

    CmartOne Got Lyrics?

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    Ight..and it's "CmartOne" hommie...you'll remember it after this......I'll post first.......2
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  3. CmartOne

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    LOL....Let the games begin...

    Let me first show this geek I'll blow his steez and won't show fatigue//
    your only chance of being "champ" is in the poetry forum "below" the "league"//
    So put "make up" on your bruised face looking like cosmetic stains//
    Your negative on flows but positive on aids//
    If you "dial" for a battle, your about to pay for the call//
    So I can't critisize your verse?..Well your name says it all//
    The way it looks I'm bad for your health you don't have a spare prayer//
    You have a better chance being "felt" hugging a care bear//
    this "duel" is regression..you'll feel the rapture as gays dispurse//
    You didn't say I was full of "SHIT" untill after I ate your verse//
    Your wack and you'll only win If I let you//
    Your styles less developed then babies grown in test tubes//...........OUCH...that hurt..lol.........2
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  4. Hatred

    Hatred 9-2 6KO'S

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    Ya mind must be cloudy because I reign ova ya thoughts
    And your blockin pop-ups from aol cuz of tha porn dat you watch
    Your times runnin out you must be tired of sloppy seconds
    I'll watch hour conversation end n give u a razor neck less
    Leave you breath less like cancer patients suckin dick
    Rip tha spine out ya text so what you standin wit?
    So now it's off to tha races...your losin color fast
    Like an embarrassed prisoner takin his first shaft
    With 90 degree angles you got squared up and boxed out
    So let's CSmartOne take anudda shot in tha mouth
    You still a no-body RM will have you listed among tha missing
    Because your ego was washed away like drunks wit Hatred pissing.......
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  5. Lil'_ elmo

    Lil'_ elmo OMG, he's back again....

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    CSmartone-you had some tight punches and i like how you format your stuff

    hatred- your punches weren't as hard but it flowed together and you still had nice punches

    vote= hatred

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    So now it's off to tha races...your losin color fast
    Like an embarrassed prisoner takin his first shaft

    hatred check your rep, and respond please
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  6. Lil'_ elmo

    Lil'_ elmo OMG, he's back again....

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    both of you came nice and i want both of you to be in my crew, what you two say
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  7. Hatred

    Hatred 9-2 6KO'S

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    iono cuz...i'm still tryna make a name fa myself..1-0 hatred up
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  8. CmartOne

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    Lemme get at you a li'l later ight?!......0-1 hatred..more votes please.....2
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  9. CmartOne

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    uppin..battles r spose to b voted right?.........2
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  10. Hatred

    Hatred 9-2 6KO'S

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    yep...rise
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  11. Hatred

    Hatred 9-2 6KO'S

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    1-0 rise...pssh
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  12. CmartOne

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    lol.......and i thought I slept...shoot........2
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  13. Ion Metatron

    Ion Metatron I Punch Faces 4 Fun

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    The battle was eh... Not bad. I think CmartOne should've Proofread his lines and did'em over though. I WAS Feeling the last two though:

    "You didn't say I was full of "SHIT" untill after I ate your verse//" That was iight, if the rest of the lines in your verse looked like that you'd be a Force

    And the Closer was good to:

    "you'll only win If I let you//
    Your styles less developed then babies grown in test tubes//"
    This was a Excellent ender, I just don't see why the rest of the verse didn't look like this

    Hatred didn't try too hard either, not many real punches and the ones that were there weren't very good:

    "give u a razor neck less
    Leave you breath less like cancer patients suckin dick
    This line I had to ask my shortie about(she's a RN) Like "Do Cancer Patients lose breath?" She said "Yea, If they have Lung cancer or their Dieing". So this line wasn't too good... Should've said Lung Cancer Patients or someshit

    Nothing more stood out in this one THUS....

    VOTE= CMARTONE

    At leats I enjoyed the last 4 lines of his Verse

    Keep Spitting it though Fellas

    NUFF SAID
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  14. CmartOne

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    ight..word....1-1...more votes ya'll.....2
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  15. CmartOne

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    uppin due to over sleepment.....lol....2
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  16. 5 Starre

    5 Starre Big Jaw Entertainemnt

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    v/ Hatred

    better quality, better structure. harder punches. was close thought dont get me wrtong but hate took it
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  17. CmartOne

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    ^^^^^^^vote doesnt count this is a dick ryding faggot...2
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  18. 5 Starre

    5 Starre Big Jaw Entertainemnt

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    ^^^^i aint dickrydin Hate man, damn foo
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  19. Parker L. Lewis

    Parker L. Lewis Bustin @ ya screen

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    this battle was just ass
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  20. CmartOne

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    ^^^^LMAO...mo votes ya'll...1-1...peace...2
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