Battle Of The Sexiest Team 1 Matches

Discussion in 'Writer's Block' started by UFO the Phoenix, Apr 1, 2005.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

    Joined:
    Aug 10, 1999
    Messages:
    2,986
    Females Team 1:

    a) MISSKEYdaQUEEN
    b) MarQuise*
    c) Xyliere

    Vs.​

    Males Team 1:

    a) MANchyld (DaRk NeBuLa)
    b) Poetickz
    c) Madnick ​



    underline theme this week is "Life Struggles"

    If you can't organize your team for a collabo post something solo


    POEMS DUE APRIL 3!!!!!!!!!!!!! (extend to 4/7)


    whoever you pick to vote off you will need to make it public by April 8 (you can vote off no shows or whoever isn't carrier their weight....remember its gonna come down to the top female vs. the top male)
    test
  2. MANchyld

    MANchyld Guest

    ok, I can't PM Madnick cuz his thing is full and he's never on AIM and it wouldn't be fair to be penalized cuz of it.....

    This is ur thing UFO so what's gonna be the solution for that? Me and Poeticz have been able to vibe a lil bit exchanging PMs because we're seperted by an 8 hours time difference. Post something solo against a collab? seems very odd and before I put more effort in doing this I want to know wassup.

    Next time could we go over rules and things in a thread before these tournaments start because it seems that starting them before all inquiries are answered only leads to confusion and wasted time. There should be a clear understanding of all rules and regulations before matches are set up and the participants should have some say in how things will be set up incase there's a disagreement.


    give it some thought for next tourney holmes, but I'll do my best for this one and hope it just works out
    test
  3. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

    Joined:
    Aug 10, 1999
    Messages:
    2,986
    ^word up yo my bad.....but lot of things going down and I dont wanna sit on this

    we been over this for the past week or so, the people involed have the say....this is your team.....you can roll solo or crew/collabo....when the dust clears you guys decide who came correct who held it down the best for the "males"...for example....and who didnt help or put in the effort.....might not wanna go to the finals....but thats when you can vote them out....you guys decide....(those are my rules)

    verse no longer then 30 lines....(collabo 90 lines)

    ya'll knew about this in advance I dont see whats the problem?

    good luck to both sides
    test
  4. Poetickz

    Poetickz The Humble One

    Joined:
    Aug 12, 2004
    Messages:
    1,008
    i say we jus do 3 1 vs 1's since we cant get a hold of eachother...i think ima just post solo.
    one
    test
  5. DiC GeTs GuLLy

    DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello

    Joined:
    Feb 26, 2005
    Messages:
    2,962
    the problem is there was no time to get this done right and the rules aren't clear so with no rules posted in the match thread, this will obviously have problems just like the final round of the reality show with EP getting 6 votes for something that's listed as 3.....

    a detailed structure of rules needs to be put in place as well as posted in each match for poets to refer to

    time needs to be taken to organize all of this correctly
    test
  6. AlmostFamous

    AlmostFamous U got a problem?

    Joined:
    Jan 28, 2005
    Messages:
    2,789
    yes sir...^^
    test
  7. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

    Joined:
    Aug 10, 1999
    Messages:
    2,986
    lot of talk but wheres the art?

    waste enough time talking....I extended the due dates to 4/7

    the longer we wait the less likly anything will happen
    test
  8. MISSKEYdaQUEEN

    MISSKEYdaQUEEN Watch the black panther..

    Joined:
    Jul 20, 2002
    Messages:
    17,838
    If my team doesn't get at me sometime today in my PM I will just drop a solo tomorrow. Aiight. So drop me a PM or something ladies! ...
    test
  9. Poetickz

    Poetickz The Humble One

    Joined:
    Aug 12, 2004
    Messages:
    1,008
    test
  10. MANchyld

    MANchyld Guest

    The Heartbreak: A Love That Should Never Be Persued

    Tangles and strifes bloody my hands like I've been playing with knives
    Making my life a blur of madness I display in some fights
    Thoughts aren't clear when all I hear leaves me tossing through nights
    Nervous and weary in daylight hours drinking coffee for might
    A loss of my mind has captured my vision into a glossy design
    As I wake from these dreams that make me fiend and fall into crime
    Desires are wasted, I can't enjoy anything without that fire- The Matrix
    A higher replacement of my pressence to reach the sky and embrace it
    That's where I can hide in my spaceship and escape from it all
    Reality is the illusion as colorful dreamworlds erase all the laws
    But when I awakwen I've lost and this isn't the way that I saw.......
    My face on the wall, getting arrested with police breaking my jaw

    Fiending Her Love

    In lock down going through shaky withdrawls, I'm starting to freak
    Supplying me temporary treatments before I'm charged and released
    Starving, asleep, still I have the strength to get to the park for a treat
    The darkness released from my soul as I stroll and dart through the streets
    My heart's growing weak, the doctors say it's from the poison I 've fed it
    Breaking my own heart without real love to destroy and neglect it
    Unemployed and pathetic, the only thing I look for hope in my pressence
    Comes in a crystal form then I'm reborn from holding its essence
    Increasing my heart rate so it's already countered prescriptions......
    That I should take more often instead of waiting 'til I fall down in the kitchen
    Clutching my chest, my stomach reflexed while the punishment sets
    Funneling breaths like I'm inhaling a dungeon of webs
    Grabbing the bottle of meds too late so I just gag on the flavor
    As the heart attack persisted I'm still high so I imagined I'm greater
    Crystal meth was the love I chose to submit my death
    As every inch of my flesh tingled exuberance, my soul gets to rest

    Permanently Releasing All Of Life's Tensions and Stress
    Feelings Repressed As My Existence Falls In The Pits Of Depressed


    The end of this poem is also my ending I guess.......
    test
  11. Madnick

    Madnick Modern Laureate

    Joined:
    Dec 9, 2004
    Messages:
    1,111
    Yo I'm here... Tell me what I need to write and I'll write it...
    test
  12. MANchyld

    MANchyld Guest

    it's way too late for that.... you need to just look at the topic and look at what i wrote and write something I guess..... it's due today
    test
  13. Xyliere

    Xyliere Shattered Demoness

    Joined:
    Mar 7, 2005
    Messages:
    68
    Midlife Crisis ~ The Story of One Woman


    "Straightjackets"

    Was all I spoke, imprisoning whispers of time

    The body, containing the mind,
    While staying acute the flesh rots away,
    Aging until raw into born again
    as though it were a mere corpse.

    Piercings of the truth harangue into ears,
    Wailing from the inside and mimicking on the out.
    Ill-bred holy totems telling of a life dauntlessly,
    Infallible kamikazes of the false gods on Earth,

    And only a straightjacket can keep them within...

    "Straightjackets."







    I apologize for the sloppiness of this piece to my team mates and to you all, but since I have yet to go through any real "life struggles", this is the best I could come up with.
    test
  14. Poetickz

    Poetickz The Humble One

    Joined:
    Aug 12, 2004
    Messages:
    1,008
    Artificial Life

    I sit beside you flooding with tears in my eyes
    hearin the lies, forced to continue to appear in disguise
    forcin fake smiles of comfort as i peer in your eyes
    shredding our lives as im forced to see and hear all your cries

    see and feel all the tubes that force you to continue to live
    within you i'd give my life, anything to help you forget
    the pain, and feelings of being unable to move, unable to lift
    painful and torturing tribute to live curse this artificial gift

    forever your husband arguing with the family
    scandeling, trying to get a better hand on these things
    every channel i see on tv has a different pan on these things
    but i know what you want cuz its what you told me, the man of your dreams

    i stand and i see the window, mobs of people standin outside
    police and security gaurdin the doors, people shouting "that man is a lie!!!"
    emotions build from this conflict, i continue to hold your hand as i cry
    times up, time to make the decision that u wished before, i can, and abide.

    with you as i cry...happy you'll be in peace...they start pullin the plug
    gradually start fading away, but they plug u back in from the powers above
    time goes on, decision is made, to let you go in peace yet again
    revived at the last minute, the church claims to let you rest with ease is a sin

    and yet again you live, more pain and agony, i continue to give you my love
    Articifical Life holds you within, you should be in heaven watching down from above
    finally, no more pain and suffering, we're able to accomplish our wish
    and with a final kiss, knowing how much you'll be missed,
    you enter the gates of paradise and bliss​
    test
  15. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

    Joined:
    Aug 10, 1999
    Messages:
    2,986
    Xyliere came thru

    Manchyld and poetickz holding it down


    madnick and misskey? didnt expect you to no show....

    I'll leave this open for the public

    also the people who did show up decide who you want to vote off (most likly the no shows will get voted off first)
    test
  16. Poetickz

    Poetickz The Humble One

    Joined:
    Aug 12, 2004
    Messages:
    1,008
    yea...ima have to say madnick...no-show u gotta go.
    one
    test
  17. RealMS

    RealMS Ne te quaesiveris extra

    Joined:
    Feb 27, 2004
    Messages:
    5,023
    Well we all know the ones who are going, wasn't really hard to come to that decision, but I'm going to print these out and read them, I'll come back and leave my comments. Glad yall three pulled through.

    -Much Love
    test
  18. MISSKEYdaQUEEN

    MISSKEYdaQUEEN Watch the black panther..

    Joined:
    Jul 20, 2002
    Messages:
    17,838
    sorry guys...I had some extreme issues. It's been a little hectic and I had last minute ~~~~~~ wrenchs. Mad love to everyone though...I'm such a boob!
    test
  19. dicnyaeye

    dicnyaeye Guest

    Marquise can go.... she's been on here long enough to know when to show up

    oh, this is Manchyld for those that don't know
    test
  20. MarQuise*

    MarQuise* Can You Hear Me*

    Joined:
    Jan 7, 2004
    Messages:
    5,268
    Hold up, my circumstances hav been kinda krazy, and the last thing i wanted to do was write, i got personal shit goin on, plus i had mad amounts of coursework to hand in, and i got exams comin next week, so my bad to my team, i hope u will be able to understand..

    Im sorry for not showing though...

    Pe@cE
    test
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.

Share This Page

Users Viewing Thread (Users: 0, Guests: 0)