BARS FOR...EVER

Discussion in 'Cypher' started by Well Versed, Feb 24, 2014.

  1. Well Versed

    Well Versed New Member

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    S/O to @Kron


    THRONE...i guess...

    Imma king in my realm, i wield the pen like excaliber//

    No matter how many nights, you spend at the table you'll never match my caliber//

    Cuz i hammer shit, imma blacksmith, mixed with gallagher//

    Straight beast on a beat, cant u hear how I howl the words?!//


    Blowing up any challenger, cuz too me rap is rocket science//

    Dude Im in the lab all day, workin on some unstoppable virus//

    They say Im sick in the head, i violently vomit up guidance//

    My words could destroy your world, like if earth and a comet collided//


    Like a prophet combined with, professor X, imma visionary//

    Schoolin kids, on how to be accepted for what they are, a mutant missionary//

    Whos Fluent clearly, in that i am well versed in all things//

    My mind frame is that of the stars in heaven, never swayed unlike the fall leaves//


    Unchanging, set in stone, is my throne, yalls flow is a calm breeze//

    Cant move my structure, or even knock leaves off of the palm trees//

    and ur the bomb? Please, my nick name should be, Oppenheimer//

    The way im planning on killin millions, as a quantum scriber//


    V2


    Ok this is more than just a hobby, see if u can follow my train of thought//

    Im in the basement, laying down tracks, that all connected contain the plot//

    You can tell im a lil off, to understand me, id have to explain ALOT//

    of crazy concepts, my thought process, is insane to watch//


    Wordplay is inane on drops, complex dialect//

    Its hard too see my spectrum, my words glow violet//

    If you think you got my number then go ahead and dial it//

    And plead your case, then tell me how the trial went//


    Youre just a child kid, with your one track mind//

    Your goal is so simple, unlike mine//

    All u want is too be rich, and live life blind//

    while Im tryin to pierce through the darkness, and let light shine//


    if u dont get my lines, its ok, my ideas are as vast as the ocean is//

    as I try to shift the tides of time, i kill em with no condolences//

    Bible and sword in my hand, show me where a worthy opponent is//

    But really im only here too see the rise, then watch em fall like the romans did//

    yeah...more to come...
    Last edited: Feb 25, 2014
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  2. Well Versed

    Well Versed New Member

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    no love? sadface*
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  3. Kron

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    Although I'm having trouble getting over the fact your lines are set up exactly the same, your content is desirable and yearns to be built upon in different ways. You have no problem writing, but you need to experiment more with a different structural approach. Don't get comfortable or else you'll be stagnant. You don't want to stagnate. You'll get what I mean once you step outside of your comfort zone and challenge yourself a bit. Best of luck, bro
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  4. The-phuking-makash

    The-phuking-makash somthing somewhat productive

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    you sir are a dope lyricist some of your bars reminded me of Cyhi
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