Bad Man.. Beat By CIRE... DROP LINKS!!

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  1. Fallen

    Fallen www.FallenHipHop.com

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  2. Kaotic33

    Kaotic33 Owns You

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    beat's alright... singings cool... your voice got better....quality/mixing is nice... lyrics are real, i'm liking the second verse more than the first. i can really relate to this song your lines are definetly the strong point of the track you elevated loads since i last heard you keep up the good work
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  3. Hodges

    Hodges New Age Writer

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    i had a feeling it was gonna be this beat lol.


    I liked the hook. Good melody and nice harmonies. Your content is on point topically, but your flow and rhyme schemes are average. You definitely have potential man. Keep at it, i can see you on a whole other level in a years time,

    holla
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  4. TWO M.C.S

    TWO M.C.S New Member

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    whats good?

    appreciate ya gettin @ me

    this is a cool cut - i like this beat, have since i first heard it, cires pretty nasty with shit - hooks ill - workin well, probably the dstrong point of the cut - flow is there, buit its not outstanding or unique - kinda feels like you havent really fully developed YOR style just yet - but it sounds like your close - the mechanics are good - just gotta put in your personal swagger

    keep it slappin homie!
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    Dskillz aka MG The Future

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  6. Fallen

    Fallen www.FallenHipHop.com

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    returned it.. thanks for the feed folks...

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  7. Fallen

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    Nice track mang, Like the hook, beats ok, flows on point, the subject matters good to I feal the same on alot of your points all and all a good track.
    Peace.
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  10. Fallen

    Fallen www.FallenHipHop.com

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    returned it...
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  11. S.E.B.

    S.E.B. New Member

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    Honestly I aint really into this type of ish, but Im feeling it none the less, I can't lie I'm lovin the hook. The second verse definately stands out, the third one is doin it, overall this a big track, can't deny that.

    Hit me back
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1035490

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  12. Sun Zoo

    Sun Zoo Speech is my Hammer

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    the hook is pretty dope....verse is decent but offbeat or awkward at parts...i don't think its good enough for you to be charging for the DL (especially given that this is a free cire beat) but a pretty decent offering...I was expecting you to suck for some reason tho, lol...

    "able to get in my circle"..... thats an example of something that sounds awkward


    i think i rocked this beat better tho....
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1035578
    first joint on the most recent album...

    (most of the beats are exclusive, but i rocked that and one other free cire beat becuase they're just too sick not to use...i have a bunch of exclusive cire joints but the free ones are always iller for some reason..)
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  14. Fallen

    Fallen www.FallenHipHop.com

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    all feed's been returned
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  15. Fasola

    Fasola New Member

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    Thanks for peeping!

    This is Em this ain't you, hahaha...you sound like him a little though for real...i like the beat...the flow is very smooth...got that alternative hip hop feel to it...i like the singing on the hook...you're braver than me...i couldn't do it...(tone def...lol)...your quality is nice...where are you from felone?
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  16. Fallen

    Fallen www.FallenHipHop.com

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    thanks for the feed... always appreciated... I've returned the favour...

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