Back with a new track "Breakin me Down"...dope track over YoungRider beat

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  1. Envizioneri

    Envizioneri Gifted n' Prolific

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    yeah, thanks for the opinion....some cats don't dig the style, others do
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  2. 5 Starre

    5 Starre Big Jaw Entertainemnt

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    nice man. i felt that beat, very hott. Def felt the emotion in there too. someone said they wanted it more fast paced but i thought this was perfect. nice lyrics, flow, etc. good peice man. holla at ya boy
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  3. Envizioneri

    Envizioneri Gifted n' Prolific

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    I definitely felt the same way....like, not every song is fast-paced....feel me?
    thanks for the good feed

    Envizion
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  4. RoyalT

    RoyalT www.myspace.com/itztkbaby

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    Beat's nice, feelin it.

    First guy, good presence and delivery. Flow's nice, could be a little smoother but definitely good. Lyrics are decent as well.

    Second guy, flow is unpolished. Sometimes your voice is rough, sometimes it's soft. Get some emotion behind your delivery and it'll make it a lot better.

    Hook- it's aight, don't like the panning from right to left, and it's too loud.

    Overall, decent track right here, keep doin it up.
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  5. KnightMere

    KnightMere KnightMere

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    sup man just givin feedback back to ya..this beat is real soulfoul lovin it...the hook is coo.... all verses were dope..i agree some of ohter ppl more fast-paced shit will bring more attention but this is nice man..keep droppin shit
    stay up 1
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  6. Red304

    Red304 iLL Tactics ENT

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    listein now** beat hot emotional laid back my type :) flow is on point got the mic makin bump noises just need a betta mic not ur fault were not all rich i kno thats right sample gets a lil anoying conecpt hot flow nice overall def worth a dl and bump daily when feelin down good drop homie

    if ya could pay back the favor here gettin sleeped on

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=956885
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  7. Envizioneri

    Envizioneri Gifted n' Prolific

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    thanks for the feed
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  8. j$crILLa

    j$crILLa ~$crillVille~

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    nice sampled beat... flow was a lil quik for the beat. but i definitly feel the topic. first guy sounds a lot better then the 2nd guy as far as voice for this beat... hook sounds str8, coulda worked it better i think .. 2nd verse, sounds good.... 3rd verse- not feelin the style on the flow really but u got some real shit to say...

    overall i did like the track, keep workin yallz
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  9. ThEsPiTTiNiMaGe

    ThEsPiTTiNiMaGe StillBumpinOldSchoolGRBs

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    i love this beat, always have.. returning tha fav

    good shit, loved the intro man, the adlibs are a tad bit overwhelming.. flows not bad, easy to makeout wat your saying and shit..

    the lyrics were descent.. not bad at all dude, i felt it dude.. the second dude had better quality?

    peCe..
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