Back with a new track "Breakin me Down"...dope track over YoungRider beat

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  1. AHTG Prod.

    AHTG Prod. My own Boss

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    I like this joint cuz its mad different. Lol, I like the chorus though. And I also liked the verses. Yall boyz keep doing it foreal.
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  2. Envizioneri

    Envizioneri Gifted n' Prolific

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    thanks man....appreciate the feed
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  3. Matt Velli

    Matt Velli The BREAF Emcee

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    aiight this is a dope beat, i just didn't like the "squeakiness" of the sample. I think for that particular song the sample should have been left alone instead of the pitch being rosen....well anywayz the first verse was dope...lyrics were straight, but then again this is a more "personal" track than one that should be taken lyrically and in that case this is a good song.....second verse was solid as well as the third verse....quality could have been upped a bit but then again no one here has a degree in mixing, lol. But dope track man, keep droppin the flames...peace
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  4. Higher Rhymes

    Higher Rhymes Active Member

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    Beat go hard.
    Lyrics and singing were DOPE, sounded like some Gravity ish lol that's pimp
    Like the rhythm and the flow, you were on point man im tellin you
    dope hook and what not

    DOPE

    peace.
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  5. Cryptech

    Cryptech New Member

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    Hittin' ya back...
    I've heard the beat before... nice sample on it...
    both come with a good flow, delivery is decent, but the pace of the track is just a little too slow. Lyrics are straight. Quality is pretty crisp. Not feeling the chorus effect. Overall it's a quality track, but like you said on my track... you sort of sound tired...

    8/10

    Kryptik
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  6. MC Devious

    MC Devious New Member

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    ah man this shit is dope...really like ya delivery and Imma hit you up on aim soon to get a collab going.....2nd dudes voice is nice two like the raspy type ah voice......also like the way you faded music left to right on the hook production beat flow delivery everythings on point 4 this track man nothing I can tell u to improve
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  7. Unfidelz

    Unfidelz Tyrannical Productions

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    This track's on the emotional tip right here. Can't say I'm feelin the beat that much. I think the sample is a bit too high in pitch. The lyrics are on point though, no need to go there. First emcee got some charisma, second emcee seems kinda bored. The panning automation during the hook is really annoying. First emcee comes back after the hook on the same level as he did during the first verse, good there. Second emcee comes back in, sorry, same deal as before, needs to work on charisma and flow. Nice track, guys.

    Thanks for the feedback on Dawn of the New Age. It's appreciated.
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  8. fuck_a_nella

    fuck_a_nella New Member

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    yea the shit sounds good man, the flow and all is onpoint , i liked the beat its fuckin clena n soulful fa sho , nice drop .
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  9. Sever

    Sever Sever that Leash

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    The beat is absolutely lovely.. very mellow and laid back, but in a while, I feel like you'd have been better off with a passion to compliment the beat, it almost seems like you conformed to it, instead of challenged it. But don't get twisted flow and lyrics were heartfelt, and nice. That beat is nice.. the sample is a little too warped for me for some reason.. lol but I'm deaf in my left ear anyway so it may sound alot more ill to normal people lol..

    excellent track man. hit my new one up if you feel like it.

    keep it up.
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  10. nawshus

    nawshus STAMPEDE!

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    thanks for the reply buddy, returning now... beat is pretty str8, drums is a little softcore though i think if they were hard it would make the beat so much dope but not gonna nit pick like that... dope sample in it though.. this song is pretty nice man, mad mellow and mad emotional, it's too bad your quality is sick because then it would only compliment the whole track.. if this had clean quality it would be even dope because the lyrics are pretty dope and the rhyme scheme is too.. flow is decent as well... good drop man, keep it up
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  11. Infinite Skillz

    Infinite Skillz R.E.A.L. Emcee

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    excellent beat riding. the tone of voice was perfect and the slow pan in the chorus was genius. i would have liked the bring me down chipmunk vocals to have been replaced with a regular vocals but it still works. good job.
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  12. A R R O W

    A R R O W Emcees Propaganda

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    checking this, that beat is very smooth man, feeling this alot... lyrics is real on this.. sounds liek some common type feel on this.. this is nice with the concept... flow is pretty cool on this.. could be a little looser on this. i like the way you did the hook on this.. im feeling that too. voice is pretty cooll too.. keep doing your thing man, sorry for the late reply

    Arrow
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  13. VG SKILLZ

    VG SKILLZ AKA V-ZILLA THE MONSTER

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    yeah man.. this a feel good track right here... soulful indeed.. keep handling yalls bizness...

    -ZILLA
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  14. ThaGrimiestOne

    ThaGrimiestOne Human Beatboxer

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    damn kid, that beat is tight...Im likin dat alot...flow fit perfect wit the beat.....need work on the chorus though, sounds to plain to me, but i could be wrong, tight track though, pz
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  15. ThaGrimiestOne

    ThaGrimiestOne Human Beatboxer

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    Thanks for feedback, uppin
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  16. Atom React

    Atom React aka JAYO

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    this beat is sick i like this a lot, your vocals a little high, ya voice ok, ya flow is nice though i like it to this beat its smooth, kinda how id approach it, your delivery pretty good to, i dunno bout 2nd head his voice dont personally appeal, well not at first he gets better. his flow is pretty smooth to but at points his writing scheme falls up and it gets kinda chopped, not bad though regardless. the chorus cool could be a little more catchy but its not bad, i am growin to your voice homie, just turn vocals down, your flow is good to i like this id collab with u thats truth, respect stay up
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  17. E.K.O.B.A.H.

    E.K.O.B.A.H. ItsArtic.com!

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    returnin the fav.

    the beat is cool, sample sounds a lil too high pitched but u gotta do what u gota do sometimes lol. could use more of a bassline, but its cool

    both rappers have good content, flow and presence could be improved imo, but overall its a cool song solid effort
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  18. Nick HaTT

    Nick HaTT New Member

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    whats good, thanks for the love so ima hold u down..

    i heard this beat .. prety hot .. ur vocals arent too great, coulda been mixed better..
    u got an old school flow which aint bad...
    the hook is aight.. i like how u mixed that .. sounds good ..
    not bad, holla at ur boy
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  19. Envizioneri

    Envizioneri Gifted n' Prolific

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    thanks for the feedback
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  20. Non$en$e

    Non$en$e The Truth

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    I'mma just get straight to the point, I didn't like the emotion. I couldn't really get into what you was saying cause it didn't seem like you ment it. The hook had a weird pan effect that I didn't like. I don't know man, I couldn't really get into this it just was a little too bland. I would of liked to see you get more into it, and add a better type of hook. Be easy
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