Back To School Tourney - West Rd. 1 (2. Blackdef vs 15. Flowetic)

Discussion in 'the Onslaught' started by FórmÅl LôGíc, Aug 25, 2004.

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  1. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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    Rules

    - 10 Lines Max, You dont have to agree on lines either.
    - 6 Lines Min.
    - 4 Lines for a no show

    - Check In atleast 3 hours before battles are due, or Ill count it as a no show.
    - Vote on 3 battles, and post links in your thread or tell me which ones you voted on.
    - No Biting
    - Recycle all you want, but your just out to lose if you do.
    - If I sense dickriding Ill subtract votes from your battle, so dont ride your favorite rapper, so vote fairly.

    - Verses are due Monday 3am EST/ 12 Midnight Western Time
    - Votes are due Wednesday 5pm EST/ 2pm Western
    - Threads of each weeks brackets will be up Wednesday night

    This a simple tourney with simple rules, so dont get all whinny on me.

    Goodluck to all.
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  2. Con God

    Con God New Member

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    checkin in and going 10
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  3. Strike2

    Strike2 Man Meets Creator

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    ight young skittle good luck I'ma dooo..somethin and prolly before monday
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  4. PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT

    PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT New Member

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    take yer time homey if I wrote lines as long as you I would need it too

    I turn battles into jokes and rappers kinda foolish…
    But dude came in first.. posted and beat me to it
    RBL’s Nr 2 kid? Thass coo I aint frontin…
    but homey is if he thinks it really ment something
    Don’t act bad I’m da bully you aint livin that…
    He didn’t lose his marbles..I jus didn’t give em back…
    And I figured that people thought strike lost his touch
    When in fact is was jus on blacks mothers crotch..
    And I’ll do it while ya watch… then yell get beaten…
    See fuck bein a freak but this pussy needs to be eaten…

    man ten lines aint shit...shoulda done 16 or somethin
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  5. Con God

    Con God New Member

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    quick key to match yur wack verse

    I see you got a wack style, best get ya head scanned too
    cuz i'd shit on newbs like you in my sleep like hospital bedpans duke
    doomed soon as u showed, you just a spooned fag whom has...
    more crapy material than when his fruit of the looms sag
    Flow knew I'd school his fuckin ass, Def's fire so learn now
    I got that faggit shitting bricks, and his boyfriends entier sperm count
    and fuck stricking girls as ugly, they got mauled when the saw you
    they'd call you fuckin fugly... if they ever called you at all duke
    im sure you have talents but it damn well aint text bitch
    I hand more L's that just fit your right collum than handheld tetris
    muh'fucka
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  6. MFB

    MFB Ciroc Boys

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    Flowetic

    I turn battles into jokes and rappers kinda foolish…
    But dude came in first.. posted and beat me to it
    nah
    RBL’s Nr 2 kid? Thass coo I aint frontin…
    but homey is if he thinks it really ment something
    nope
    Don’t act bad I’m da bully you aint livin that…
    He didn’t lose his marbles..I jus didn’t give em back…
    lol...alright
    And I figured that people thought strike lost his touch
    When in fact is was jus on blacks mothers crotch..
    okk
    And I’ll do it while ya watch… then yell get beaten…
    See fuck bein a freak but this pussy needs to be eaten…
    okk..

    Bkackdef

    I see you got a wack style, best get ya head scanned too
    cuz i'd shit on newbs like you in my sleep like hospital bedpans duke
    lol, good opener
    doomed soon as u showed, you just a spooned fag whom has...
    more crapy material than when his fruit of the looms sag
    nice..
    Flow knew I'd school his fuckin ass, Def's fire so learn now
    I got that faggit shitting bricks, and his boyfriends entier sperm count
    line of the match imo
    and fuck stricking girls as ugly, they got mauled when the saw you
    they'd call you fuckin fugly... if they ever called you at all duke
    ok..
    im sure you have talents but it damn well aint text bitch
    I hand more L's that just fit your right collum than handheld tetris
    oh my...lol

    Overall this was a good showing by both competitors but honestly this was truely onesided. Flowetic might of been a little rusty and got an unlucky draw to be matched up to a skilled oponent such as blackdef. Imo blackdef just outshined flowtric

    vote- blackdef
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  7. PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT

    PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT New Member

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    lol @ you recyclin a weak line but all and all pretty nice verse cant feel bad

    I thought it was obvious I aint the newb here tho junior
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  8. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    What the fuck @ Blacks first 6 lines literally being shit lines. Tetris line was awful too. Sadly it was enough to win.

    V/Blackdef
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  9. Con God

    Con God New Member

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    lol keystyle.... key word keystyle

    and no offence flowetic I just dont know of you, stay up playah
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  10. PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT

    PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT New Member

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    thass coo homeboy none taken but the strike name was my original
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  11. Anaphora

    Anaphora was here

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    Flowetic: The RBL line was pretty damned funny... but the others were just kinda OK...
    Blackdef: Good verse all around I thought... all the punches were nice, nothing filler, best of the tourney that I've read so far...

    Vote: Blackdef
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  12. DiViNeHaTrEd

    DiViNeHaTrEd aka ResiduaL

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    Flow's first six lines were actually alright.
    I liked the opener...and the marble line was flipped alright.
    Yes, people have prolly used it tons but dude used it nicely here.
    Verse was consistent overall, shit wasn't bad and I'ma say the first 6 lines were strongest...but that closer was bad man, generic and played out by far.
    Decent though.


    Black,
    I actually thought his first six lines were his best. I thought the saggy material line was pretty coo, shoulda been worded differently but it worked.
    The sperm count line was a nice flip on the faggot/ass fucking type steeeeeeeeeez an' that opener was pretty decent.
    The call you line was eh, you used it before and then the closer was no.
    Overall though, I think ur first six lines were better than Flow's first six lines...an' both of you had gay closers so to me, it was really like 8 decent lines of Flow's against 8 higher quality lines of Black.

    Decent battle though, ya'll showed up an' both posted 10. Enjoyed the read but:

    Vote=Blackdef for comin' with better lines here.
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  13. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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  14. lil hot sauce

    lil hot sauce Dallas Mavericks

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    Strike

    Don’t act bad I’m da bully you aint livin that…
    He didn’t lose his marbles..I jus didn’t give em back…


    that is really the only line that was decent from you..

    BlackDef

    I see you got a wack style, best get ya head scanned too
    cuz i'd shit on newbs like you in my sleep like hospital bedpans duke
    doomed soon as u showed, you just a spooned fag whom has...
    more crapy material than when his fruit of the looms sag
    Flow knew I'd school his fuckin ass, Def's fire so learn now
    I got that faggit shitting bricks, and his boyfriends entier sperm count
    and fuck stricking girls as ugly, they got mauled when the saw you
    they'd call you fuckin fugly... if they ever called you at all duke
    im sure you have talents but it damn well aint text bitch
    I hand more L's that just fit your right collum than handheld tetris


    your whole verse was good...lol

    therefore...vote-BlackDef
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    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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