Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by mc k-nice, Mar 18, 2006.
good looks ya'll
lol@nim -- i dont know if it was on the page...dz sent it to me a long time ago
BeatGodz > Knice
The production was excellent. Listened to this a couple times, delivery and presense are real good now. Keeps getting better.
This shit was hot, like feces at high temperature.
But I got time to kill before class so Ill actually give a critique woo... beats cool, not my steez, but it fits your voice and delivery perfectly... Delivery is some of your best, its grimy without sounding like youre trying to be grimy. Lots of lines in the first verse, you already know which ones, no use listing. Hook is ill. The high pitch ad libs really make it.
2nd verse... The way you stop in the middle of a bar at the beginning is fresh... Ad libs in the back are ill RRRRRAAA! " So I let her... Its whatever" The " Its whatever " sounds kinda corny or too soft to me. Thats bein picky as fuck though. Ill track. Its no "Closure" but its dope as fuck for what it is woooooo
dope dude, props
thanks lil homey
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