Babble - "Anywhere But here" (Title track to new album/need RM opinion)

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  1. removed_username

    removed_username Shine on Hypno

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    So I'm about 80% done with my album that I've been working on for the last year or so.

    This one in particular I take to heart and want to be right, so I keep coming back to it and re-recording.


    Let me know what you think

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  2. Neezy Hamilton

    Neezy Hamilton Law & Order.

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    my nigka @Babble

    W/b bro, where u been?

    Dope track btw

    Sent from The Gawd Himself
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    removed_username Shine on Hypno

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    Thanks!

    Don't remember a neezy hamilton but Just chillin', livin' in Boston, making music, and working.
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  4. removed_username

    removed_username Shine on Hypno

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    upppp
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  5. Porkchop

    Porkchop Well-Known Member

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    Sup Mr Babble...Listenin now..I like it.Keep putting up your music and spread the word and get ya pals to come around..Ya hear? HA HA
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    removed_username Shine on Hypno

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  7. Smouble ML

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    Babble what part of boston u in? Did u go to the parade last week? Can I go n hear this song in person instead? Whats ur adress? Post in here My pm dont work.
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  8. GaLaTeA

    GaLaTeA GymArt

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    This track goes hard.. Props.
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  10. quotive

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    i just cant vibe w/ this bro.
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  11. tbone

    tbone Well-Known Member

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    I was looking for your old shyt on your youtube, but couldn't find it. this shit dope though
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  12. DefKnotEmo

    DefKnotEmo G.R.G.

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    I wouldve seriously skipped out on the intro it was kind of corny to me. No hate just not what I want to listen to before a song. Beat is so dope man, did you produce this? I like the laid back flow, kinda like an arab drake.
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    removed_username Shine on Hypno

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    removed_username Shine on Hypno

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    Thanks for the comments guys. I hear a couple of things I need to tighten up.
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  15. tbone

    tbone Well-Known Member

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    good looks
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    removed_username Shine on Hypno

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  17. I wArFaRe I

    I wArFaRe I Love 2 Hate

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    dope bro...upp
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  18. Sin Skywalker

    Sin Skywalker #184 Gladiator.

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    Yeah Babble's dope I like this song.
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  19. J o o k

    J o o k Win your battles before they’ve even been fought.

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    I like the concept of the song.

    The intro isn't conducive to the songs message. The chorus needs to be worked out because it detracts from the verses.

    The verses are raw, emotional and real. I fucks with the lyrics heavy. Everything is dope re: the verses, so if you re-record just put the intro on a diff song and make the chorus more listenable then you have a hit on your hands.
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  20. SiegeSupreme

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    I thought you went in on the second verse moreso than the verse but wasn't feeling the constant voice effect on that part. Thought it'd be more effective if you stopped the effect when you stopped the sing-rapping thing you were doing, right before the "See I was never hungry but my pops was" part. But you went in the entire track, for some reason I just liked the way the 2nd verse was structured moreso than the first.

    And I concur what Jook said. I actually liked the intro too. It was sorta cute and showed a playful side. It is actually a dope intro, but it really didn't fit here because you're rapping about real life struggle shit and not sex or something.

    But dope song bruh. First time listening to you but I'm definitely a fan
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