Battle Audio Battle,Lyrics Included (Will return the favor by voting fairly on GRB battles with breakdowns)

Discussion in 'Audio Emcee Hook Ups' started by Killious, Aug 24, 2013.

  1. Killious

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  2. C~Moneys Toilet

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    you idiot :funny:
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  3. C~Moneys Toilet

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    @Cire the first guy? Dope shit. Wish it was over a beat though.

    Second person British? he is fucking trash. atleast he rapped over a beat

    Vote goes to Cire.

    edit: Can't be Cire he rapped for over 30 seconds straight :funny:
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  4. Killious

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    yo thanks for voting man,i really appreciate it,link me to any of your open battle and ill give a bar/bar breakdown
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  5. C~Moneys Toilet

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    Go to the GRB section bro.

    Vote on Me (Windtalka) vs. Nahmed.

    I am Wintalka. I have the supreme flow and magical lyrics.

    can u get to the battle yourself? or do i really need to link u?
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  6. Pace Beats

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    waiting for the beat to drop
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  7. Killious

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    yeah i gotchu,i found the battle,vote will be up soon
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  8. C~Moneys Toilet

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    "Is it closed homie?Cuz i cant seem to comment or vote on it? The medicate line was murder btw"

    wtf? they closed it already?

    break my bars down in here bruh
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  9. Killious

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    Yeah sure,here it is..

    You had a decent delivery in my opinion. Your mic presence was decent too. Its just that the beat didnt do justice. The lyrics were impressive,nice flow and nameplays.

    Like the flow in here to be honest. The ikea shopping simile was ok. I chuckled when i saw your last two lines,especially the ''bodybag or a coffin'' line. Impressive swagger in my opinion. Decent set.

    Nice rhyme scheme,straight crack. Your setup was decent again,especially the penultimate line. The nameplay was sick as fuck,props for that.

    Lol the first two lines were hilarious. The ''all kinds of positions/twister crawl'' bit was crack..a fresh and a dope concept. I think the second last line shouldve been your first line,the punchline was again decent,liked the Demerol/med on his ass concept. Good bar.

    Ok the structure over here was a bit messy but a good bar nonetheless.I think the first line wouldve been better as the punchline cuz personally i found that bar more hard hitting. Clever shit and i liked your though process in this bar. The whole bachelor in her shit was some bodybag material if it was framed in a proper way.

    Lol @ the smurf rapist line,shit was funny. The second line was decent,the nameplay was good,i mean when you are battling a person like Nahmed,you can win just by using nameplays..and you had some dope nameplays. The first aid kid/med on deck thing was a cleverly thought out line.

    Lmao the second line was banging,wasnt feeling the first line though. I really liked the whole joke of med/doctor cox pun..decent shit

    Nice multies here,decent flow. Smoke when write / bic was a dope concept,you just didnt frame it in a proper manner,other than that,this bar had swaaaaag.

    Bux=Warbux? The first line had a decent personal but that was it. Wasnt feeling this line tbh,i mean you had some decent bars before this,i was expecting you to be consistent..but you were consistent,just fell off here tbh.


    Overall-You have the potential to be RM's best MC man,i will not lie. You have some crazy concepts and nameplay ideas which in my opinion is dope. Your mic presence and delivery is decent. Just choose a better beat next time. Other than that,you are decent.

    Is that it? I can break it down a bit more if you want
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  10. C~Moneys Toilet

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    @Nahmed

    Thanks bro. I wrote that shit in 10 minutes and recorded it one take with the flu and a sprained ankle. I was hungry as fuck and only ate a ham and cheese sandwich that night too.

    So you think I won or nah?
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    yoooooooooooooooo I'm gone at "slow it down I just dissed you"

    I missed that part dawg... you're a beast. :funny:
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  13. Killious

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    I would say Tie keeping in mind that you recorded it in one take,im not sugarcoating btw,i always keep it a 100. If you had the right beat,you would have taken the W,my vote-TIE

    and that verse was super tight for a 10 minute shit,props man,keep doing your thing

    100 ez
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    Thanks bro.
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  15. C~Moneys Toilet

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    So who is your favorite to win the GRB man?

    nahmed cheated on some bullshit to beat me, but who do you have winning this?

    Pace?

    and thanks for saying I have the potential to be one of the best mc's dawg... i appreaciate that shit.

    im gonna be featured on sever's sevolution album and trying to work with a few artist on here.. u heard of sever?
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  16. Killious

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    Honestly man,i dont know,there are many talented artists here...It would be dope if you and duane meet in the finals
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    Thanks bro. Now that I know he used to be Atom React, I would crush his bitch ass :funny:
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    c omeny u were wild talka?
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    yes.
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    That's what's up. Glad to see you doing big things homie, been fuckin' with your music for awhile now.
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