Attack the man above you

Discussion in 'Cypher' started by Sir Bustalot, Aug 16, 2010.

  1. SOUNDR@GON

    SOUNDR@GON Zig'n & Zag'n

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    Ok here's another ^who's dumber? YOU or that dope above ya?
    Fuck the both of ya, I asked around, nobody knows of ya!
    Wanna-be shot callers, make Lloyd & Harry look alot like scholars,
    These toys are my pets, I keep Petey caged, Pup in a shock collar!
    I could have the mutt sittin, stayin or playin dead,
    Or playin with a BITCH head, til piss is sprayin' her legs!
    But animal abuse? Nah, I just slay a canine,
    So likkle puppy's saved, then slain in the same rhyme.

    Fortune cookie rap from a newb thinkin he's rubic's cube,
    Delusional, his cube is a box in a sewage tube.
    His stank ass is offensive and the bum is tresspassing,
    @ the bank harrassing those passing @ the lack of change he's amassed...
    ...When, he says he's killin a pup It's like winning a rat race.
    Cause even if he wins, he's still a RAT in a maze, at a faster pace.
    Can't run with the hounds, he's a runt! Runnin with small dogs,
    Frontin like he's boss hog, huntin' for odd jobs.
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  2. THB_JR

    THB_JR Member

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    OHH DISS ME
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  3. pete_nova_soul

    pete_nova_soul New Member

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    what makes you think you rhyme hard ?
    with all the punch your lacking
    i'll put him behind bars..i'lll dungeon dragon
    shoot him on the spot, i wont hesitate
    fiire off some shots,it'll set him straight
    leave a couple at his top, no wedding cake
    bullets penetrate when im unloading the gat
    they'll hit up sound's click, like i was uploading a track
    you know that your wack, with them flows u fabricate
    you get no accolades cuz your raps are gay
    now i got this nigga shook, no cassius clay
    your fake as fuck but claim to be a vet
    u been here for years but no oine sees u as a threat
    cuz ur persona is seethrough, aint shit about you leathal
    but you still bellieve that you the best ?
    please! you should backspace and delete your schemes
    matta fact, you could eat shit and die,
    like fear factor deleted scenes.....faggot

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  4. ThatsNotMyName

    ThatsNotMyName The Conquering Lion

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    Ayo I grabs the mac-milly like Jay and act silly
    Like your sister whenever she's with me
    My body is made of steel, bullets bounce off it
    You the wackest rapper here, you will neva see no profit.

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  5. pete_nova_soul

    pete_nova_soul New Member

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    i shouldnt pay no mind to what this homo says
    clamin ur bodydmade outta steel?
    but my bullets tore yo flesh
    pete nov draws more arms than Goro's sketch...faggit

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  6. Mr. Hahn

    Mr. Hahn Member

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    Check it, this, malicious young rambunctious delinquent of a tyke
    Is about to be run ova' by Mr. Hahn's fresh insight
    Real clever, yeah, sick comebacks son, they really hit the mark, Ha
    But I take your lips and staple you to a halfpipe at the skatepark
    Yeah, call me Tony Hawk, and I'll call you my board
    Cuz I be riding while you burnin' below this verbal lord
    You be craftin junk in your cave while I bring the masterpiece
    My rhymes are iron, your words are worthless, I turn 'em into casualties
    You burn faster than a natural disaster, quicker than the cheapest of trees
    You the sticky icky icky, I'm the real OG, both on the streets and in the THC
    Your style is garbage, it's childish, Chief Keef of internet;
    Burstin' gats right off the bat but smoked by Hahn, like a weak cigarette.
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  7. pete_nova_soul

    pete_nova_soul New Member

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    i quote his post on this messageboard, to prove what kinda writer he is
    he said he's tony hawk and im his board, so i guess he's riding my dick
    ill wreck this fag ..i left him stabbed as bloodshed, he's hurting
    i was ""dressed in black to pierce"' this cat like paul's nets jersey
    i made a basketball refference,but u aint a player u just sit in the crowd
    and all my highlights left u pesimistic,thats why yo ass is getting so loud
    you aint a threat chump, you should sit down and just quit
    this verse is hernia, from the jump u already knew it was sick
    comparing me to chief keef? tell this bitch we gon fight
    cuz the type of shit he spits...thats that shit i dont like
    nigga i could tell thats ur old with the flows that you wrote, now hes vexxed
    im surpised his old ass hasnt called me a ""sucker mc"" yet
    but im done replying to ur weak ass cuz thats that lame route
    plus yo style reminds me of a rusty jungle gym, dem rusty bars is played out

    faggit.....



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  8. Mr. Hahn

    Mr. Hahn Member

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    I'm tired of you frontin' so hard, cussin' so hard, Pete
    Your momma teach you nothing bout no manners? She seemed sweet
    She was really a treat, eat that meat, rinse and then repeat
    Best of all she knew her master, and her dungeon in the hotel suite

    I make Pete retreat, with my dope sheet, knocked offbeat and onto the street
    Watch me unseat, defeat, deplete Pete, medium rare on this piece o' raw meat
    You really wanna compete in this rap meet? You obsolete, goin' against the elite
    When I bring the heat, it indiscreet, I complete my feat bumpin' any beat

    You wanna talk about played out bars, go ahead
    You gonna rap or just babble the word "faggit" instead?
    My style is worn? You got no style, you vile like a pubescent child
    You wack, just like your rhymin' is, you mild, yo' girl defiled

    This is the part where your rap breaks down, and where you run away
    Nigga you a clown, feel the verbal beat down, and bleed out where you may
    I be the master, you a hip hop disaster, young whelp needs to sit the fuck down
    You'll drown, face down, and float around, wear no crown, take nova's_soul and run his town.
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  9. pete_nova_soul

    pete_nova_soul New Member

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    i already killed this nigga two times
    yeah..he got stomped with ease
    but i guess i gotta kill him again
    cuz death comes in threes

    you aint one of the best, and you know it son
    stepping to me? you playing russian roulette
    with a fully loaded gun....i'll shit on your set
    i give a fuck where his homies from

    everybody could get it,i'll catch a body on scrimmage,
    load the shotty the clip's in, start to cock it
    as it kicks this niggas wig in, just another victim

    fuck a punchline,i dont waste bars on herbs
    this is lunch time, mr hahn is served
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  10. Maskil

    Maskil Last Gunslinger of End-World

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    Excuse pete nova, Drake wants his style back/
    you bout as fuckin gangster as assholes wit fanny packs/
    you just a fake bitch and trannies round here get smacked/
    you aint body nobody, the only thing you smoked is crack/
    you just a another whack, wankster posin ...just an act/
    all i seen was fucking pussy when i barely read ya trash/
    so i guess i'll bust a nut instead a cap inside ya ass...
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  11. scroggins

    scroggins Member

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    Maskil your single syllable rhymes are lookin whack
    some mistake me writin rhymes with cookin crack
    I aint talkin shit just bookin facts
    you wont make it cuz of me I might as well have took his stack

    I dont need to spit I'll burp and fuckin murder you
    now your homies wish they never heard of you
    I never could write lyrics but im learnin to
    close to no skill but still a youngen did you like a burner do
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  12. RMomentum

    RMomentum New Member

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    Grab a backpack and pack it up your ass
    Backpacking Faggot go camp somewhere el-se (has to be said in a special way so it can rhyme with "ass".)
    Scroggins in stockings, he's a drag queen
    Dick Dragging Stocker, a Machine.
    You say you murder, but you can't murder shit
    'Cuz I'm shady aftermath, you just murder inc.
    Corny Rhymes, you stuck in a maze
    Where you lookin' at? I'm not gays! (it's spelled like gaze)
    When I speak with you, I have to speak caveman
    Me going to kill you! go ran!
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  13. scroggins

    scroggins Member

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    half that didn't even make sense homie
    dont need to murder you you did it fo me
    i read that and felt dumber
    my rhymes hot
    your shit couldn't melt butter
    you like to talk about fags and drags
    probly a closet gay
    wannabes like you get get body bagged and tagged
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  14. RMomentum

    RMomentum New Member

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    No one wants to hear your verses, and I think everyone agrees
    People try to avoid them like a homeless with infectious STD's
    Okay... first rhyme, that was wack..
    Still stronger than any of your shit, and your raps!
    Gettin' this feelin' I'mma murder some fag
    Who cares about this bitch? fuck a bodybag
    Why you calling me homie? Let's get this straight.
    I Ain't no homo, and I don't want a date.
    Wanted to kill you, but you already dead.
    Can't kill a rotten piece of meat without a head.
    My shit doesn't make sense? sorry, you retarded
    if you missed the double entendres, than you garbage.
    I read your verse and I only saw 2 metaphors
    No wordplay whatsoever and, damn.. I'm bore'd
    Gettin' this finished and I wouldn't respond back.
    Don't waste my time, gain some skill before that.
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  15. Dr.Phlow

    Dr.Phlow The Governor of Assault.

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    16 lines was enough, tell this kid to stop it please
    'Couldn't 'tell 'what 'sucked 'more - your punchlines or placement of apostrophes
    Your avatar doesn't prove your manhood it only shows us what your missing
    And that white crust around your mouth sure isn't doing the convincing
    This entire threads filled with ya garbage - you seem a bit obsessive
    And next year in 6th grade you'll learn that 'bore'd' can't be possessive
    Every line you type is awful - I can't believe how dumb you sound
    Finish middle school you fool - and then come back around
    Or skip town and try to drown but I bet you'd probably fail at that
    This cat thought it had to rain in order for him to hail a cab
    It's just the truth my style is brute and I'm just shocked at your IQ
    I typically don't beat-up kids with downs but I've got no problem fightin' you
    Ya just not ready - read ya books and stay away from lootin banks
    And return to RM.com when you stop shootin blanks
    What's funny is its been 8 years since I last hit these boards
    And now I got my fix - this verse was my final word


    Hit the archives and do some studying, rook...
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  16. scroggins

    scroggins Member

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    why did you reply to his bullshit
    come look down the barrel of MY verbal glock and fullclip
    get popped like a bullwhip couldnt step to me if I was right in front of you
    your rhymes cold like the winter mines burn thru the summer
    Im rainin on your lighter better turn to the cover
    hop off my dick muthafucka word to ya mother
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  17. mr.redeyez

    mr.redeyez Member

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    SUCK MY DICK BITCH^^^^^^
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  18. Maskil

    Maskil Last Gunslinger of End-World

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    lol.... elegant in all it's brevity
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  19. RMomentum

    RMomentum New Member

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    Dr. Phlow your verses were pretty good, btw Bore'd was a grammar mistake, english is not my mother tongue so...
    I was a little bit sleepy when I wrote that, I only go here at night(most of the time).
    Let's start:

    Dr. Phlow are you high on acid?
    Rap possesses me, Yes I was obsessive.
    I see you've been here since 2002
    I might be a rook but who are you?
    Get the fuck out of this boards, women should be on the kitchen
    I'm a male, so you can get the Dick just call me charles with no dick-ends
    It's long enough to suffocate and penetrate at the same time
    Ass rape like in prison, only I'll pay your mother with a dime.
    Sorry, I started to rap but didn't introduce myself
    Name is Fabio but call me: Mr. That-will-put-you-on-the-shelve.
    You'll get shelved and forgotten like 8 years ago
    Blow and Bow, Show no love for this hoe.
    LOL at scroggins for acting all MACHO
    I see who wears the pants and who eats at each others ass like it's a nacho.
    Help Him Doctor, show this moby where is his dick
    Oh, couldn't you feel it it's in your ass, just not as thick.
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  20. lazerscope

    lazerscope Member

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    You make me sick, you talkin' bout ass and pricks?
    You suck more than nicotine fiends on cancer sticks
    RMomentum, with a name like that, you won't dare last...
    In a battle with me; it's ironic your'e going nowhere fast!
    I gotta say, Fuck you and whatever country or state you from
    And the only way you'll have good English, is with a British priest's dick on ya native tongue
    My AK drums, bet you and ya team fall in line
    Cuz me 'n my bitch stay on point like hair on porcupines....
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