At Same Time(deep song) leave links

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  1. Triple_N

    Triple_N Embodiment of a tru emcee

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  2. Triple_N

    Triple_N Embodiment of a tru emcee

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  3. .The omen.

    .The omen. Member

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    lets see watchu workin with here trip... chorus kicks in kinda chill, nyce vibe to it, on some g unit shyt to me lol... now verse is comin, good quality, flow is pretty cool the blood trails line was cool, my fav outta tha first verse, gave me a good image in my head, i got distracted during 2nd verse talkin to a bajillion ppl, 3rd verse comes in realllll fast cool shyt flow goes off at just one part by goes too fast but i dont think it was n e thing major, i just woke up so im havin trouble payin attention but u know u got this shyt down... need i say more?
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  4. Neruk

    Neruk Runky Runky

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    beat is kinda boring.. chorus is kinda boring.. descent but doesnt catch my attention.. delivery is good, not my type of thing, but im sure a lot of people can feel it.. nice lyrics you got.. ehh hook again not diggin it.. again 2nd nice lyrics, but starts to bore me.. you got skill but it aint my steez
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  5. Tha Q.

    Tha Q. FiVe SoUrCe CeO

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    like I said on another site...haa


    this wasn't bad

    flow was there

    lyrics were good


    jus didn't feel it as a whole


    solid though


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  6. exothermic

    exothermic Well-Known Member

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    listening.....

    ur voice is deep aint it lolol... qualitys iight... beats cool..... chorus is amm less than average lolol needa work on that try making it catchy n getting the rhythym right for the beat n make the delivery match n shit.... verses were cool tho.... flows pretty good rhyme scheme jus needa more ³³³³³³³³³³ to it... delivery pretty good jus needa alil more animation meaning differing between bars n ull be good.... lyrics coo..... overall coo song...


    PLZ RETURN FEED
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=12282136#post12282136
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