at no point was eminem the greatest multisyllable rhyme ever

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  1. Ness Lee

    Ness Lee I'm kind of a big deal

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    i dead ass was a huge fan of the boy till he started doing all these robotic cadences and yelling. it literally hurt my ears. i still bought every album hoping he'd go back to sounding natural though
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  2. J Keeper

    J Keeper Super Jesus

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    I don't know why, but I felt like posting this verse to see the opinions of folks on here.

    I'm fantasta-fuckin-fabulous,
    For a bad luck cat with a past of piss,
    I got passed what I deem to be hazardous,
    I came back with a dream team, smashin' shit,
    Not a masochist, I just haven't gripped,
    The way to avoid pain's paths and twists,
    But I've changed what the coins say, added flips,
    Now I'm making my own way, tracking bliss,
    Gotta blunt, some weed, and a lighter too,
    It dispels all the darkness I'm fighting through,
    And if it fell through the hardship, it would light the room,
    As it melts with the target, the vibrant gloom,
    What am I to do? I wanna give up now,
    I'm finding truth, at the bottom of up-downs,
    Climbing through, hope the rocks never run out,
    Mind the view, it won't stop until sun down,
    ...When I'm up in the sky,
    I feel rain but it stays down under my mind,
    I feel strange but I train on what runs from my eye,
    I feel stains but they'll fade when the sun will arise,
    I get by,
    Barely breathing,
    Fine when I'm high, so I'm rarely seated,
    Hi,
    I've been scared to see it,
    But now I realize that I'm fairly seasoned,
    Try,
    That's what I seek to do,
    But the colors all bleed when you dream in blue,
    And I ain't got the time to keep scheming hues,
    When the palette is a mallet that beats the truth,
    While I reach the moon, my arms always fall short,
    Keep it cool, it's the start of a starport,
    Speak the truth, and the heart will be stalwart,
    Seek the proof, and the mind is your sharp sword,
    There's a war to wage,
    There's too many people in the fourth estate,
    And they ain't saying shit about the course we take,
    They just hide all the lies and give gore a face,
    It's just pain,
    Masked with a garment,
    Woven with capital, and passed to the market,
    Hoping the masses choke on the gags and
    float to the traps of the masters who starve them,
    Change,
    It's what we hoped to see,
    But that change never came, now we know the scene,
    We've been living in shit, and your old debris,
    And we're sick of being told that it's pot purri,
    It ain't nice,
    Broken glass,
    Fights,
    Turn to smoking gats,
    I hate life, but I'm right to be cold and brash,
    Cuz the hand that it dealt me was folded fast,

    Hope you don't enjoy, think it's shit, and make fun of me for it.
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  3. r00k_is_rap

    r00k_is_rap Well-Known Member

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    Did Ness really say someone sounded robotic and text to speech? And was he talking about one of the GOATS in hip hop?

    :hoffawut:

    Also:

    That was pretty dope. Seems like you have talent. The context was just homo as fuck and emo. Hope that's contructive for you....write about soemthing interesting. Try a story or self boasting.

    Poetry doesn't work very well.
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  4. 12345678

    12345678 New Member

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    lol ur white as fuck i like eminem but u say ANYTHING bad about him an its like blasphemy to white ppl.
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  5. Frankie Wapps

    Frankie Wapps New Member

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    agreed. even down to the specificity of the comparison and the people used as comparison has me like: :hoffawut:
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  6. azhotazice

    azhotazice Active Member

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    Goat shit
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  7. Tricky P

    Tricky P Well-Known Member

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    "Cause see they call me a menace and if the shoe fits I'll wear it
    But if it don't, then ya'll swallow the truth grin and bear it
    Now who's the king of these rude ludicrous lucrative lyrics
    Who could inherit the title, put the youth in hysterics
    Using his music to steer it sharing his views and his merits
    But there's a huge interference they're sayin you shouldn't hear it
    Maybe it's hatred I spew, maybe it's food for the spirit
    Maybe it's beautiful music I made for you to just cherish
    But I'm debated disputed hated and viewed in America
    as a motherfuckin drug addict like you didn't experiment?
    Now now, that's when you start to stare at who's in the mirror
    and see yourself as a kid again, and you get embarrassed
    And I got nothing to do but make you look stupid as parents
    You fuckin do-gooders - too bad you couldn't DO-GOOD at marriage!
    And do you have any clue what I had to do to get here I don't
    think you do so stay tuned and keep your ears glued to the stereo"
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  8. Freebass

    Freebass NAH NUDDAH

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    merit.....
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  9. Smashal0t

    Smashal0t Member

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    hey I'm black and I bump the shit outta eminem....moreso his old shit. Now come to chicago and tell me I'm not a real black person...
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  10. RonSimmons

    RonSimmons my name, is Battle Rap

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    yea... absolutely amazin, too bad he's white so he'll never get the respect he probably deserves
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  11. Freebass

    Freebass NAH NUDDAH

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    what happens in Chicago if that gets said?.....I lived there for years and feel like I must have missed out on some of the realness
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  12. QuadDamageNZ

    QuadDamageNZ 1O SB NZ

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    prolly already been posted but....

    "Windows tinted on my ride when i drive in it, so when i rob a bank run out and just dive in it so i'll be disguised in it.. And if anybody identifies the guy in it i'll hide for five minutes, come back, shoot the eye witness.. Fire at the private eye hired to pry in my business "


    "Till I collapse I’m spilling these raps long as you feel 'em
    Till the day that I drop you'll never say that I'm not killing them
    'Cause when I am not then I'ma stop penning 'em
    And I am not hip-hop and I’m just not Eminem.
    Subliminal thoughts when I'm stop sending them women are caught in webs spin and hauk venom
    Adrenaline shots of penicillin could not get the illing to stop.
    Amoxacilin is just not real enough.
    The criminal cop killing hip-hop filling minimal swap to cop millions of Pac listeners.
    Your coming with me, feel it or not you’re gonna fear it like I showed you the spirit of god lives in us.
    You hear it a lot, lyrics the shock is it a miracle or am I just a product of pop fizzing up.
    For shizzle my whizzle this is the plot listen up you bizzles forgot slizzle does not give a fuck."

    Em that dude.
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  13. mapleleaf

    mapleleaf bumpin onyx in the jag

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    thats how he always sounds now, it's pretty weird. it's like he forgot how to rap.

    til i collapse is really ill tho

    he's yelling but i think it sounds more natural, it also works with the track

    lol at kurupt being on his best rappers list tho
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  14. Tricky P

    Tricky P Well-Known Member

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    yea just copied that from a lyrics site. fixed.
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  15. Tricky P

    Tricky P Well-Known Member

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    he sounds natural in all the BET cyphers tho. dunno why he changes his voice like that on track its a shame.
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  16. mapleleaf

    mapleleaf bumpin onyx in the jag

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    [youtube]miIxNCn-vjY[/youtube]

    this is hilarious for many reasons but he makes good points

    starts talking about em from 3:00 on
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  17. iAmAchilles

    iAmAchilles disrespectful nigguh

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    lol saurus writes about movin weight and how he hears fiends scream in his dreams. pete got dat work
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  18. Ness Lee

    Ness Lee I'm kind of a big deal

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    thats laughable now, but kurrupt used to be an animal b
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  19. jordank

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    kurupt was so much better on west coast beats imo, anyone else feel me on that?

    and I think em peaked on the marshall mathers lp (and renagade ofc)
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  20. jordank

    jordank Member

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    holy shit a guided by voices fan on a battle rap forum props man
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