Discussion in 'Battle Video Archives' started by the rhyme king, Nov 16, 2012.
half of this shit did'nt even rhyme
your stupid as fuck. gg
most on point post
NO ONE WAS TOUCHING EMINEM IN THAT DEPARTMENT AT THE TIME
EXCEPT like you were saying
HE ACTUALLY DOES RHYME WHOLE SENTENCES , EVERY SINGLE SYLLABLE --------->
See, now I’d bet a fuckin G, you prolly thinkin’, now, who the fuck is this misfit/
Proving something on this mix, Dude this must be a misprint/
True, im bumpin this list, trick, move, I’m snuffing these bitch kids
Y’all niggas is bout as sweet as the nugget stuffed in them twix sticks/
It’s Tonedeff, the nigga dat cuts through these suckas with swift lips/
Clueless fuckers get wigs split, Rumors come but they’re dismissed/
Fooling us with a quick switch? Tuned to some other mix disc/
Would be like finding Nas with the Blueprint bumping in his whip/
Fools get dumped in a ditch, just rudely fronting like big fish/
Now, print this, The Plague, bitch, crews don’t want it with this clique/
You was hunting for tidbits, then you found the Archetype and
K-Slay, the playa with the most exclusive cuts in the bizness/
My shit is a little bit more than the human tongue can omit/
Hit floosies up where their slits drip, do this under their clit lids/
Columbian & Cuban blood under this skin,
Who can touch the description of a psuedo-super-pun with a slim trim/
I’m – the new and improved functioning whiz with Luger-lungs/
And the fitness to the deliver the most brutal bumps to these dim wits/
I’m Driven as if I threw a clutch in the stick shift/
One listen’ll strip 30 years from your life, shit, music this comes with a pension/
Intensive, administration of a million tooth-puncturing pin-pricks/
From all of your minions to the bastard who fronts your equipment/
Disaster soon comes in a instant/
To pussy virtual tools, like Lara Croft with a two guns tucked in her middrift/
Dig this busted youth becoming so twisted/
Kids’ll request Smilez & Southstar more than the true 100% shit/
QN5 is the governing imprint/
That’s bludgeoning oppostition with the indifference of a grandmother who would smother an infant/
I’ll leave you stunned as I come to admit this/
Yo, son, nah, really… you’re nice… and J.Lo’s pussy’s a wonderful Christian/
I’m adjusting my lenses… niggas really looked thug from a distance/
But the minute you come close, you see the slump in their limp wrist /
And I’m plugging your chick, dig? it’s nothing tremendous/
See… I loan her the cock, and you’re stuck with the interest/
Her lust won’t allow her to front or resist this/
Stiff dick that so big, that Tonedeff get counted as a couple in the census/
Punch with a clenched fist, rupturing defenses, till your only fear is survival/
I will spit scriptures that embarrass the bible/
Go ahead, spit, You’re still wearing the title? Then back it’s back to your place/ I’ll say you’re wack to your face, faster than simon from American Idol.
EDIT: DAYUM !! SEATTLEBATTLE actually already posted this exact song as an example... BIG UPPS
wow you are an idiot .. homie just posted the best example of an MC who has mastered the art of mutli syllable rhyming to the point he actually had a track where whole sentences/lines where every syllable matches , and all of it rhymed fool (plus he got the best flow in hip hop)
lulul thought someone would post tonedeffs champion freeverse/masochist/velocity/ some other stuff not turn it up though..
you know not what you do
damn all the tonedeff love in here...i'm so happy i got cherry eyes
louis logic pretty good too although he doesn't use the same scheme for bars and bars like other rappers tend to do. nice thing is his multis are among the least forced i've heard, like you have to pay close attention to notice how complex they can be
the CHAIN IS ENORMOUS, and keeping up is a real GAME OF ENDURANCE
I always get some LAME LITTLE OFFICE that specializes in CLAIMS OF INSURANCE
Or the oCCASIONAL FLORIST - dope as fuck IMO
This isn't to take away from Em who definitely is up there with top when he tries....which he hasn't in years.
wow no-one mentioned Kool G Rap??
This whole album is one big multi....you may say they simple or whatever but he telling a coherent story with more multis than just at the end of a line...
[Verse 1: Kool G Rap]
Yo, she was a tight bird, female version of Iceberg
To put in the right words
Played the right curves, beige and white birds
The type she served it was quite superb
Ran through the city in a white suburb
Lived in a predominantly white suburb
She liked the herb, rockin all the richest type of furs
Make your life submerge if you strike a nerve
Dough she like to splurge
Shine of her light blurs from off her finger
Honey was off the ringer, the way she tossed the flamer
'94 walked into danger, behind the wall fought with a banger
Trapped in the beast, gas released, a rat deceased
Back to the street, back on her feet
Clappin the heat, from the back seat, in back of a jeep
Stackin the heat, pilin the ones
Made her point when violence was brung
Regulated and balanced the slums
Brought in a cat with a talent for guns
Click quick to silence a Dunn
Convoys of black limos
Employs strapped with mack millos
Bustin off caps through a cracked window, that's the MO
Push your wig back, make you a black Leno
The feds on her tracks got the phones tapped for info
Tryin to map the dividend flow, and where the ends go
Checkin on whose name the Benz go
Who pushes the buttons when Mac-10's blow
A rose on a black satin pillow
The silhouette of her web, killin for bloodspill, a black widow
i hear you, always wondered why Tone never got much love online, that aside i couldn't for the life of me remember that one track he dropped a verse so clean, then came across this.
for the cdq version skip to 317 for tone's verse, easier to hear on the cdq.also yeah thats PH aka pumpkinhead dropping a verse too.
"Why is it every time we're on the outs
You want me to sleep on the couch
And now you telling me to leave my own house?
Give me a break Miss, what are you shitting me?
You wanted a kid with me?
I don't think that I'll be needing a spouse
You can take my keys and I'll bounce
Cancel both our Visa accounts
Divide the savings into equal amounts
And you can stop all of your sneaking around
Like I don't see you in town with my replacement cause you keep looking down
All this deceit puts a frown on your face...."
I like Louis but he was an Em clone when he first came out....
Tone is cool too but he is completely nerdy and outside of geekdom unlistenable....
Excellent thread is excellent.
Eminem is terrible and only wiggers enjoy his music.
hows tricks foo?
All good Lucy!! got wifey popping out babies like gremlins out here lol next ones a girl!
What you been upto?? Anything exciting?
just posted that Tonedeff track as an example (thats as far as hes ever pushed his multi writing abilities not his best track)
upps for posting Let em Know thats in my top 3 tonedeff tracks (and thats saying alot) his flow on that is crazy , one of my fav hip hop tracks even though its just a beat and flowing , but the shit is so next level (in 2003) i still haven't heard someone spit w/ a flow that complex / dope
edit: ohh and yeah 616 Rewind> thats a certified classic
i'm convinced this fool is from the burbs or def not America , a can't count how many black dudes i seen bumpin Eminem or quotin' or spittin his shit (esp. back 98'-03')
u didnt like Slim Shady lp or Marshall Mathers lp????
just answer that lol
pls ban op and the first guy to reply to this thread. thanks, much appreciated
and em had a lot of cage's steeze too at first...come on no one is original
tone is def pretty nerdy rap wise and has a kinda gay voice tbh. his technical skills though >>>> (no canibus)
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