Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by varentao, May 25, 2003.
Any meanings, anyone? I'm intrigued to know them, like..
i must say i liked it....nice piece
Words of truth and knowledge, completely. I felt this piece was filled with twisted, deep meanings that you needed to think about, before anything else. I don't want to be stupid, but I may have a meaning and that is destruction:
"Doom days beckon upon sunny hills
As the children play in bliss of innocence"
"Amid the dust of time that slowly settles
Howls of pain haunt these days of darkness"
"Dawn soon comes to smell of rotting..
Amidst the soothing sounds of streams
Whilst blooded sons go to die in vein
For green desire of the fat cats reign"
The words you had used to conquer over the true meaning just left me in awe. It was a delicate piece and will live with me forever. My blessings..
I don't know how far off I am, but I'll take a wild pitch and say it sounds like what one would feel if they were going thru some kind of internal conflict/turmoil....fill me in.
Wow, this is a great poem. Normally I don't even like poetry.
no one can look 'stupid' when getting their own interpretations out a piece of writing or any kind of art or what not...
...i usually try to place one main meaning, then three others...but people seem to get others too..
...so i appreciate it all...
nice thats a fresh way of expressing a mood into the stanza's
with a little off to side for us to snack on
i liked this one as well
gotto go like the wind
appreciated e man..
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