As Conflict Churns....

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by varentao, May 25, 2003.

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  1. varentao

    varentao New Member

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    Any meanings, anyone? I'm intrigued to know them, like..
    test
  2. unspoken1

    unspoken1 Revolutionary Wordsmen

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    i must say i liked it....nice piece
    test
  3. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    Words of truth and knowledge, completely. I felt this piece was filled with twisted, deep meanings that you needed to think about, before anything else. I don't want to be stupid, but I may have a meaning and that is destruction:

    "Doom days beckon upon sunny hills
    As the children play in bliss of innocence"


    "Amid the dust of time that slowly settles
    Howls of pain haunt these days of darkness"


    "Dawn soon comes to smell of rotting..
    Amidst the soothing sounds of streams
    Whilst blooded sons go to die in vein
    For green desire of the fat cats reign"


    The words you had used to conquer over the true meaning just left me in awe. It was a delicate piece and will live with me forever. My blessings..
    test
  4. augee.ali

    augee.ali Lively Up Yourself...

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    I don't know how far off I am, but I'll take a wild pitch and say it sounds like what one would feel if they were going thru some kind of internal conflict/turmoil....fill me in.
    test
  5. The Real Nick

    The Real Nick New Member

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    Wow, this is a great poem. Normally I don't even like poetry.

    Later...
    test
  6. varentao

    varentao New Member

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    no one can look 'stupid' when getting their own interpretations out a piece of writing or any kind of art or what not...

    ...i usually try to place one main meaning, then three others...but people seem to get others too..

    ...so i appreciate it all...

    ..resp...
    test
  7. e'S

    e'S sdrowkcab mi kool

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    nice thats a fresh way of expressing a mood into the stanza's
    with a little off to side for us to snack on
    i liked this one as well
    gotto go like the wind
    test
  8. varentao

    varentao New Member

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    appreciated e man..
    test
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