Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by apostle031, Feb 18, 2006.
i 'd laugh at you clowns ..
and if u did that ud prolly lose lol.........im pretty sure u cant just laugh at someone and win. u kinda need a verse lol
i'm votin for apostle in this one. here's why.
the kid haslike less than 20 posts. which mens he's pretty much brand new to this.
just check out his format...he hasn't really grasped the ins and outs of how battlin works at this cite. tyrant, you been here long enough to know you need to really dig in when you battle a rookie like this. you shoulda killed him. instead, you chose the easy route(rhyme one and two syllable words all the way through the verse).
apostle at least tried to be as creative as possible...so he gets my vote. tyrant, just because you're battlin somebody like apostle doesn't mean you can come half ass and get an easy win.
uppin for votes 2-2
aight... still uppin
hmmm............i didnt kno american and organizations were 1-2 syllable words........
anyways, uppin for votes 2-2
i mean...check out apostle's verse...it was mad hard to read...dog you just need some work...hit that dojo...those lines were long ass hell...haha...but you're cool though...you tried man...keep working
tyrant you were cool...on the mic this'll probably be hot...but in text...you got to make up for people not being able to hear the flow...with more creative lines...you know...and american and organizations...don't rhyme for every body...nah mean...
my vote is at the top...later later...
uppin for votes 3-2
vote - tyrant
he's got something going for him, simply because his lines werent overly stretched and whatnot
plus he actually had some punches...and some other stuff i cant quite make out yet, like i said in ur other battle, ur showing promise with the quickness ur picking this all up...keep it up
neither of you are horrible or w/e ppl say...yall just new to this text shit... keep it going, you'll get it
uppin for votes
UPPIN GOD DAMMIT!!!!!!!!!!!!lol
I don't think you two are terrible... but I think you two may need to revise the "way" you format what you write. It's kinda hard to understand any punches cuz of how long some lines are drawn out (apostle) and how some lines don't even rhyme (Tyrant).
My vote goes to Apostle on this one... but really I ACTUALLY flipped a coin to see who would win this. If theres such thing as a tie... then you can put that down as my vote.
^lol @ flippin a coin but watever. uppin for votes
still uppin for some votes.....
uppin GOD DAMMIT 4-3
................................................jesus christ. how FUCKIN long is this gonna take
omg lik 100 and something views and only 38 responses
he's more interested in this shit. I've never seen someone up a weak battle so convincingly, for that you got my respect. FYI, it takes alot to get to the next step, write your lyrics down, look over them like 2 days later and see if YOU feel that they're tight. You'd probably have mixed feelings most of the time and what you gotta do is try to make them more interesting, flip the wordplay or go a different route with it. I used to do that and it's done wonders for my texting skills. If you want this bad enough then go for it joe, but if not then stop wasting your time because all you gonna get is feedback like the ones people been giving you lately.
Elevate and maintain, I'm out
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