Apostle vs. TyrantTMABM

Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by apostle031, Feb 18, 2006.

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  1. Final Chapta

    Final Chapta End of Story

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    i 'd laugh at you clowns ..
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  2. TyrantTMABM

    TyrantTMABM registered to shit on u

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    and if u did that ud prolly lose lol.........im pretty sure u cant just laugh at someone and win. u kinda need a verse lol
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  3. dizthachozen1

    dizthachozen1 ...free your mind...

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    i'm votin for apostle in this one. here's why.
    the kid haslike less than 20 posts. which mens he's pretty much brand new to this.
    just check out his format...he hasn't really grasped the ins and outs of how battlin works at this cite. tyrant, you been here long enough to know you need to really dig in when you battle a rookie like this. you shoulda killed him. instead, you chose the easy route(rhyme one and two syllable words all the way through the verse).
    apostle at least tried to be as creative as possible...so he gets my vote. tyrant, just because you're battlin somebody like apostle doesn't mean you can come half ass and get an easy win.

    VOTE=APOSTLE031
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  4. TyrantTMABM

    TyrantTMABM registered to shit on u

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    uppin for votes 2-2
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  5. apostle031

    apostle031 god's soulja

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    aight... still uppin
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  6. TyrantTMABM

    TyrantTMABM registered to shit on u

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    hmmm............i didnt kno american and organizations were 1-2 syllable words........
    anyways, uppin for votes 2-2
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  7. Enaud

    Enaud New Member

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    Tyrant won...

    i mean...check out apostle's verse...it was mad hard to read...dog you just need some work...hit that dojo...those lines were long ass hell...haha...but you're cool though...you tried man...keep working


    tyrant you were cool...on the mic this'll probably be hot...but in text...you got to make up for people not being able to hear the flow...with more creative lines...you know...and american and organizations...don't rhyme for every body...nah mean...

    my vote is at the top...later later...
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  8. TyrantTMABM

    TyrantTMABM registered to shit on u

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    uppin for votes 3-2
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  9. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    vote - tyrant


    he's got something going for him, simply because his lines werent overly stretched and whatnot

    plus he actually had some punches...and some other stuff i cant quite make out yet, like i said in ur other battle, ur showing promise with the quickness ur picking this all up...keep it up

    apostle too...

    neither of you are horrible or w/e ppl say...yall just new to this text shit... keep it going, you'll get it
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  10. TyrantTMABM

    TyrantTMABM registered to shit on u

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  11. TyrantTMABM

    TyrantTMABM registered to shit on u

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    uppin for votes
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  12. TyrantTMABM

    TyrantTMABM registered to shit on u

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    UPPIN GOD DAMMIT!!!!!!!!!!!!lol
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  13. Symmetry

    Symmetry No slang is a signal son

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    I don't think you two are terrible... but I think you two may need to revise the "way" you format what you write. It's kinda hard to understand any punches cuz of how long some lines are drawn out (apostle) and how some lines don't even rhyme (Tyrant).

    My vote goes to Apostle on this one... but really I ACTUALLY flipped a coin to see who would win this. If theres such thing as a tie... then you can put that down as my vote.

    Vote= Apostle
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  14. TyrantTMABM

    TyrantTMABM registered to shit on u

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    ^lol @ flippin a coin but watever. uppin for votes
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  15. TyrantTMABM

    TyrantTMABM registered to shit on u

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    still uppin for some votes.....
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  16. TyrantTMABM

    TyrantTMABM registered to shit on u

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    uppin GOD DAMMIT 4-3
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  17. TyrantTMABM

    TyrantTMABM registered to shit on u

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    Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  18. TyrantTMABM

    TyrantTMABM registered to shit on u

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    ................................................jesus christ. how FUCKIN long is this gonna take
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  19. TyrantTMABM

    TyrantTMABM registered to shit on u

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    omg lik 100 and something views and only 38 responses
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  20. Louisville

    Louisville Dat nigga

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    vote= tyrant

    he's more interested in this shit. I've never seen someone up a weak battle so convincingly, for that you got my respect. FYI, it takes alot to get to the next step, write your lyrics down, look over them like 2 days later and see if YOU feel that they're tight. You'd probably have mixed feelings most of the time and what you gotta do is try to make them more interesting, flip the wordplay or go a different route with it. I used to do that and it's done wonders for my texting skills. If you want this bad enough then go for it joe, but if not then stop wasting your time because all you gonna get is feedback like the ones people been giving you lately.

    Elevate and maintain, I'm out
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