"ApOcAlYpSe"

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  1. Den-S

    Den-S .:.The Chosen One.:.

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    Flames engulf the surroundings, the people in cries//
    A new crisis has arrived, black dust fills the skies//
    Little kids scatter amongs the streets, in full amok//
    I see the elders, kneelin in prayer, wishing for luck//
    Time stands still, to see the world in such a hurry//
    To make up for lost sin, lost time- amidst all the flurry//
    Legs collapse from the wondrous maze before my eyes//
    I see animals rushing for cover, grown men with tears in their eyes//
    The greenery now smothered in black, the skies start to part//
    A glistening presence from the Heavens, terror in my heart//
    Eyes start to welt with tears, wondering what my fate shall be//
    I see my ma and pop across the street, rushing over to me//
    We knew this was coming, didn’t know how soon it’d happen//
    Yesterday I was in the studio rappin, and now the ground is crackin//
    My little brother runs over and he’s got me in a tight hug//
    Look at my peers in awe, for now I see the world consumed with true love//
    For not knowing what is to come from above, who among us is going up?///
    And who among these people will feel the wrath of Satan’s glove?//
    My street up in heat, and some of my dearest friends have departed//
    Within the confines of hell, mind so numb I cant remember how this started//
    All I’m grateful for is saying my prayers each night//
    For not giving up hope in this greatest of fights//
    For not succumbing to Hades when shit wasn’t goin right//
    For seeping through the darkness of life, and encountering Christ’s light//
    Now existence wishes to rid of me; in which way, I’ll find out soon//
    Eyes closed, tears flowing discreetly, I discover my way to the home of the moon//
    And as I’m being graced upstairs, by an unknown power, I tremble//
    Peer downwards to see my father and sister still amongst Earth’s crumble//….​
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  2. lpoet

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    only 2 at a time
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  3. Den-S

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    aight...uppin fo feedback...
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    Den-S .:.The Chosen One.:.

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    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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    hmm...i thought i closed this..but maybe i didnt....

    this was dope...loved the flow...
    Legs collapse from the wondrous maze before my eyes//

    nice shit...i pictured this entire poem in my head...very good imagery..i read a seris of books a while ago about the end of the world called left behind..this kinda reminds me of one of the books...i think its actually called apocolypse (sp) 2.....nice job man....done know why cats is sleeping on this..
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  6. Dark_Angel

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    i loved this peice, your imagery is really great and i loved the flow and the rhyming of this peice. just beautiful
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  7. Den-S

    Den-S .:.The Chosen One.:.

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    thanks, appreciate the responses
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  8. Blunted Reality

    Blunted Reality Still Blunted on Reality

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    well done Den...this was very well written and the rhyme scheme was excellent. Loved the read...keep it up.
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  9. Den-S

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    thanks...
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    illpoetical raising the bar everyday

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    this really was dope stay up
    1ne
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    Den-S .:.The Chosen One.:.

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    thanx...
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