Another fucking Biter Exposed.... Madnick, get yo bitch ass in here

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  1. DiC GeTs GuLLy

    DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello

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    This is madnick's verse this week in the PTL.

    I float through my quixotic reveries,
    and stabilize, once in a while,
    to touch my feet upon their ground
    of desolation.
    I visit this; the land of barren souls, just broken,
    and crushed immortal vows of love.
    This place;
    disquieted,
    from spoken pains and silent fear,
    grief stricken minds and pulsing wrists
    abandoned after years of bliss.
    It is a latticework of weary bodies.

    Their world is far too broken for my heart,
    so I float back to my land of mercury-
    where I can bathe in quick-silver,
    and change my temperament
    as lovers change their tunes.
    And in this land, hopes rest so high,
    to look up is to see no longer.
    Their spires gleam amongst the clouds, as they reach the point
    where skies are ending
    and the rest is all beginning.

    I will set all my desires, and all my silly dreams on fire-
    To blaze forever in this evenings sky;
    One atop another, glowing, gleaming.
    They’ll flicker as we bicker, seeming
    to change their gleam to fit my mood.
    There is a bonfire of smoke, collapsing from the beauties I believe.

    However wrong, however right,
    I’ll stay with my hopes for tonight.
    And you may sigh, and shake your head
    As idealism reigns again.

    Within the reaches of this moonlight,
    I will appraise each starlit face--
    As if mere beauty were enough
    to keep me from leaving this small place.
    And belief will force its’ tenderness into the palms I hold up to you today.
    Believing you can hear me pray.
    Believing reason breathes and lives in this.
    Belief, and that alone is where I lay.


    This is the same piece posted earlier this month by a woman from another site.
    Name of her poem was....

    Concepts of Hope - Era.. something like that
    author name... Jennifer Faylor.... same exact piece

    http://www.ablemuse.com/erato/ubbht...TML/004456.html


    wtf are you biting just to get a championship? that's some stupid ass shit unless you're Jennifer Faylor, which I will find out soon enough, you better just confess now and get your punishment over with
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  2. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

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    Whats going on around here?
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  3. absolute zero

    absolute zero Among the living

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    hahaha jeez.....wtf....
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  4. Pent uP

    Pent uP I'd Like to Fight Ten Men

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    lol@it being madnick

    kid couldn't handle losing
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  5. v-Dynamo Kidd-v

    v-Dynamo Kidd-v Dynamite

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    and that was in the thread that exposed k.love and he turns around and does the same shit? damn
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  6. RealMS

    RealMS Ne te quaesiveris extra

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    okay anyway

    Would any other writer out there in cyber world (here anyway) like to do what every other biter has not? Come clean already man. This is getting to be some old news. You know there is possibility of being sued for doing this type of stuff.

    -Peace
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  7. ManMadeofAshes

    ManMadeofAshes *DREAMER

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    recycled talent. bye everyone. Nice reading your poems. Maybe you will read some of mine again somewhere that I never posted! Or yours. Happy reading!

    thisssss place is dead to me. (for real this time lol)

    actually I just finished up my obligation in the slam. so I guess I didnt technically go against what I said before. Just been coming a reading..

    fuck I though I liked Madnicks work too.

    anyone wants me Im on www.myspace.com/manmadeofashes

    Im going to start posting my poems there for people who read, and it takes out the expectation of getting feed. Hence, I won't bitch. Also I have my art posted there that I have been doing... digital manipulations. And a picture of me, but thats pretty lame compared to my art. haha. bye chumms. Maybe I will talk to some of you then. You can be on my buddy list and support each other without worrying about this silly shit that seems to come with any board you post on.

    good luck out there everyone. Im just over all the drama. I got out of highschool 4 years ago. I really got to stop going back.
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  8. ~Eloquent

    ~Eloquent Narcissistic....

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    wow think how easy it just is for anyone to steal your poems over the internet
    some of us might never find out...
    its wack...
    i dont know yall
    its just so easy for just anyone to turn around and act like anyone else
    this internet shit might just be a little to shady....
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  9. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

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    ^no doubt....thats why you have to have your own voice....if you notice in most of my poems I use reference to my name or other realm poets....so biters beware...

    I rarely if ever post my best work on the net...no offense just seen to many biters you know

    but regardless I dont see why you cant use this place to vent?...explore new ideas?....or just for basic fun workshops....keep growing
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  10. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    And it all falls down.
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  11. ~Eloquent

    ~Eloquent Narcissistic....

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    yea true i should find a way to do audio so no one could ever bite my voice...lol
    i was very disapointed to hear this about madnick...

    anyways people could bite my writing but i always got more
    so i guess im straight...
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  12. Poetickz

    Poetickz The Humble One

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    its a sad sad world.
    one
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  13. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    lol, you know how many bitters there actaully are on this site, probably dozens... just only a few have been found out. I think it's kind of naive to think that this kind of shit doesn't happen, cause it happens more then any of us know. I know when I post a piece on the net there is a good chance that it's going to be recycled or stolen... or what ever you want to call it, by some one else. Just if you are posting on the internet, on a public site, with out copywritten work... prepare to have it bitten. Don't be so shocked that there are bitters around the realm... cause there are alot more still posting... believe that
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  14. absolute zero

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    ^^^^that's very true actually, and it's scary to think of that. And it's also pretty pathetic for people to bite poetry. I mean that's emotions.....it's the most beautiful thing about language, and it can't remain pure.
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  15. screamer

    screamer New Member

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    ummm. a good way to fing out if your poetry is being bitten is throwing a disntict line into an advanced google search.
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  16. eM-T

    eM-T Because We Are

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    im not so much concerned about getting my shit biten (I can and will do better) as much as it fucking pisses me off to read bitten work and give a detailed review to a person that deserves no credit. Its a waste of my fucking time. I just wish someone would try to bite me in real life... ohhh yes. and the face turns to mush. yummmmmmm.......
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  17. ~Eloquent

    ~Eloquent Narcissistic....

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    Indeed...
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  18. MisterEThoughts

    MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth

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    Damn! I used to like this guys work, too... Whats crazy is I had my stuff get stolen before, my writing and my pictures, thats why i hardly post anymore. I am going to publish my stuff. Soon, so watch out for it hehe.


    Dang, This sucks, guys:( so maybe he just stole only that poem? have you checked his other writings? or is it just this poem in particular?


    OK, yea!
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  19. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

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    ok I'm closing this now

    Thanks for informing us

    but Madnick doesnt deserve this much attention

    keep ya'll heads up and pen to the paper forget the haters and lurking Alligators
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