"An Intrikit Mind"

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  1. AzeussuezA

    AzeussuezA The Mods Are Gay

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    My book is now being Published and will be ready for sale.
    This thread is just to find out how many of you would purchase it when I get them and get my website up.

    The book will have:
    45 Poems
    10 Short Stories
    5 Full Page Photos

    It's titled "An Intrikit Mind"



    I'll post a few of the poems that will be in it that you may have seen on here. The others however are much better and not gonna be given away.


    DEATH

    An ambiguous board game diseased with manipulation fueling victory
    Yet there is no way to win in this game
    U can only play it
    Until your turn is over
    Then once every player has played their hand and passed through dirt
    Went back to their ancestry
    Can we truly step away from the Unbroken table of age
    Stop breathing - Stop eating - Stop crying and Truly Live

    In Death's Grip we are Born


    Copyright ©2003 Jonathan Rex
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  2. AzeussuezA

    AzeussuezA The Mods Are Gay

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    DEJA VU

    I've spent enough time twisting
    Energy's essence between my thoughts
    Caught in a never ending, mind bending,
    Shape shifting existence
    Dream to Reality from Reality back to Dream
    How do I wake from the Real
    This seal of false light can't heal me
    As the pattern becomes more Intrikit and Subtle
    And being swept along is no longer enough.....


    Copyright ©2003 Jonathan Rex
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  3. AzeussuezA

    AzeussuezA The Mods Are Gay

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    DESTINY'S MEMORY LANE

    See my shadow dancing on destiny's doormat
    I fall flat...pick myself up walk a few steps and do the same
    A never ending game in which I lost my name
    Re-born within the walls of real my whole world put to shame
    I once sat on top of the world with nothing in my hands
    Now I walk below the seas stuck within the sands
    Time erodes my essence explodes and now I'm back at One
    Wishing I would have known what I knew not when this begun

    Worthless Screams The Rabbi Worthless Without Form
    Worthless Chants The Student If We Do Conform
    Reality's Realms Do Not Exist Within False Light Of Lust
    Holding To This Lie Of Ours Until Our Senses Bust
    Left With Nothing More Than What We Came Here With
    We're Just Blowing In The Wind Our Whole Being Is A Myth
    In Years To Come My Crumbs Will Be Dug Up From The Ground
    Studied And Placed In Walls Of Glass In Which There Is No Sound
    Yet I Remain Free From Form Must Not Conform To The Rules Of This Game
    Dancing On My Shadow's Dream In Destiny's Memory Lane....


    Copyright ©2003 Jonathan Rex
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  4. AzeussuezA

    AzeussuezA The Mods Are Gay

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    MOVE ME

    Move me
    Reach into my soul with words of infinity
    Compliment my mind with caresses of your lips
    Let your tongue slip along my silhouette as you embrace my essence
    Titillate my every emotion channeling an orgasmic reaction
    Satisfaction

    Make my savage turbulence subside and realign my innermost love
    Connect me with my moralities and interpret my core
    Mi Amor -
    I call out to you my love...My twin of opposite
    Embrace me - Erase me - Create me inside you
    Tell me what you see in my eyes
    Whether it be loneliness or cries
    My death or allied lies
    When I manipulate society's sight and slip away into the night
    Machiavellian in flight to return and take my place
    Look into my face and...
    Move me


    Copyright ©2003 Jonathan Rex
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  5. h.wood

    h.wood IMAGINATION SUPER STAR

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    i love that last one-
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  6. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    these were nice. You gonna have to send me a copy of ya book man...i'm serious

    one luv
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  7. Dark_Angel

    Dark_Angel Dark_Angel

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    really liked the last one, nice work...i would but have a feeling im a little to far away to get one of these
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  8. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER I own you motherfuckers..

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    yeah this was nice but you know me i got to drop something i love that last one better

    Like idle hours my title towers like overtime on a punchclock
    Lunch hot like a Hungry Man’s meal hamhocks I munch on the block
    Have a bazaar sketch that’s far fetch like nature it rain
    In your brain like a hurricane like a sink your mainrame drain
    These literary characteristics even make a secretary ballistic
    Make her a hype fighter pushing a typewriter so sadistic
    Jot down notes, pop nouns and quotes like a Grammar teacher
    Use verbs and words to express my best glamour feature
    Unlike low self esteem flow deft and mean like a stream
    Brothers my comprehension is in another dimension it seem
    Is it a dream? Like the pros and cons my flow beyond recognition
    Like blonde ambition even Marilyn Monroe know this edition
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  9. AzeussuezA

    AzeussuezA The Mods Are Gay

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    Nah, I'd make sure it gets to you.
    May cost a little bit for shipping.
    Where you at?


    BTW when everything is handled I'll be putting up a website to advertise the Book and my CD.

    We'll also be selling:
    Posters
    T-Shirts
    Different Types Of Hats
    It's a project in progress....
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  10. Dark_Angel

    Dark_Angel Dark_Angel

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    i live in australia..so yeah i figured most here are americans so i thought i may be a little out of the way..maybe other side of the world..so yeah well we see how it goes
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  11. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    all were really good......good look with the book and website
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