amERICA I LOVE lookin for guest verse and new beat. leave feedback

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  1. Malawi Dawi

    Malawi Dawi New Member

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    amERICA my favorite slut
    sucks,she fucks,whoever come here,
    unloyal bitch, my people spoiled it,
    slavin, modern day cavemen,
    evolved from apes,
    create a slanguage, my aim is to heal this pain and,
    shame the devil, my grandfathers hangin,
    u witnessed it,shit condoned it,never forbade it,
    highly hated, scream i came quick in this white mans offspring,
    i know im off key im faded, but, fuck it
    i butt fuck it and love it, this bitch amazin,
    goin asian,lets face it,
    she not built like the bitches in jamaica or antigua,
    but i could never ever leave her,
    my queen AFRICA,
    means my niggas need me and likewise,
    i tell this bitch white lies,
    black is beautifull, black pride wit my black bride,
    nigga kids gettin baptized by a white guy,
    native religion lost, tru religion floss,
    native menace drug boss,
    trap house cathedral, good samritan,
    american people, pusin heroin through a needle,
    evil, her passion her currency, currently,
    got my niggas buried in,
    pine boxes cases runnin concurrently,
    crime stoppin, its like what other options?
    Yall got my brother locked in,got a brother locked in,
    thats another locked in,
    then you raped our mothers,
    lightened up that dark skin,
    tryna get in harvard, pardon my hardness,
    got to make an honest livin,
    ya kiddin, this the land of business,
    married to america, but where the fuck my mistress,
    she can cook a good dish,
    had us workin in the fields,gave us scraps from the pigs,
    CAN I LIVE, CAN I EAT,WHAT WILL I SHIT?
    IS IT POLICE,
    got no love for those pigs,
    watchin dog the bounty,huntin for my nigs,
    got em runnin through the strip,whoopin ass wit his stick,
    got the nerve to try and kick,
    knowledge, pop him,
    yellin at the plasma, if the homie aint have asthma,
    never wouldve happen,real niggas wouldve clapped him,
    didn't like how that was handled,and im flickin through the channels,
    nancy grace came on, talkin bout trayvon,bill o'rielly same song,
    always caught in the wrong,
    I bet you wanted black kids, and a nice brown ass on the back of ya bitch,
    if not maybe latin,
    this amERICA, im american,
    proud to say that
    ,ima stay black,
    pay tax,take tax,embrace that,
    i pledge allegiance to the flag,
    that hides the demons of my past,
    THIS THE REASON IM MAD,
    committing treason, never that,
    protect it at all costs, if she calls war,
    salute the troops still breathin and laid to rest sleepin,
    combat in iraq left amERICA'S eye black, lie back
    and zone with me, zone with me.

    test
  2. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    not bad not bad some of it was off coarse but overall i see the potential ...stay g"d up homie
    test

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