Ambition

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  1. the omega man

    the omega man so, it goes

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    Lone Buzzard O'Maley longed to lead his seafaring tribe
    of psychedelic fetuses
    in search of the Holy Rubber Vomit relic of Infidelia
    But then....................and so..............but...
    ...........then.............after that................
    next....................the end
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  2. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    Um... ok, what does this little blip mean? or what is trying to be said here?
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  3. Dana Boy

    Dana Boy New Member

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    Very strange indeed. Is this like a haiku?
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  4. Matthewop

    Matthewop New Member

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    don't undertand the meaning... ><
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  5. fairydance2000

    fairydance2000 don't wait, Procrastinate

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    I am sorry i don't understand what you are saying.... have i missed something?
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  6. the omega man

    the omega man so, it goes

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    Re-read the title....that should help you out
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  7. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    I failed to make any understanding of this myself. Usually, when poems rely on a special text format to usher a point across, they usually get tangled on the idea itself. This is a case of that.
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  8. the omega man

    the omega man so, it goes

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    I have failed to find the meaning behind this as well...

    My step father wrote this before he died and we laughed about it but I never knew why

    In fact, the orignal was written on line paper with no formatting, just paragraph form, no line breaks, however, it has been 12 years and I have still not understood his purpose...if there even is one....C'mon Coup help me out
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  9. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    ^just knowing that makes me laugh. awesome. ima look at it hard lol
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