Allnakey V.S. MarQuise

Discussion in 'Writer's Block' started by Mind~$oul, Jun 7, 2004.

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  1. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Here's what you'll be doing...

    Time
    dream
    death
    journey
    sex
    war
    suicide
    racisim
    culture
    misery

    You will pick one of those words and write a poem. The poem must have an intro and an outro. The intro and outro must be in cinquain form (5 line poem) using the word you picked . For those of you that do not know how to write a cinquain i'll show you....



    Line1: one word to name the subject tree
    Line 2: two words to describe it.... tall, green
    Line 3: three action words about it... growing, reaching, standing
    Line 4: a four or five word phrase describing the subject (a thought, not a complete sentence) a witness to the past

    Line 5: one word that means the same thing as the first word, or a word that sums it all up. future

    Tree
    tall, green
    growing, reaching, standing
    a witness to the past
    future



    Here goes another example...

    Snowman
    Chubby, cheerful
    Waiting, grinning, winking
    Icy weather keeps him smiling
    Frosty


    Simple.....




    Sign in by Saturday, June 12! Verses due Monday, June 14th!!

    Voting due Friday, June 18th
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  2. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    What the fuck... hmmmmm
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  3. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Oh god, if you have a problem with it aint no tellin what other people are gonna be saying.
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  4. MarQuise*

    MarQuise* Can You Hear Me*

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    Hahaha, this is fukin KraZy Malik!
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  5. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    Dont worry about this, i got it
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  6. nathedawg

    nathedawg New Member

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    so what exactly do we have to do to be qualified for this? ive wrote this kind of stuff before
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  7. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    doesnt seem that hard to me
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  8. MarQuise*

    MarQuise* Can You Hear Me*

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    aarrgghhh, i cant do this shit! lol
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  9. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    Um MAR i think you did that wrong, the intro to your piece is suppose to be done like that, then you write a regular style poem for your body, then you do an outro cinquain


    SO it's

    cinquain(intro)

    Anything you wanna write in any form
    ...........
    ./.............
    ...........
    .........
    .........
    ......

    cinquain (outro)
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  10. Evg.poet

    Evg.poet As the Heart Speaks...

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    none of you guys wrote cinquains in highschool? (just a question)
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  11. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    Dream
    sporadic, Confusion,
    Sleeping, thinking, silently
    The pinnacle of illusion
    Rest

    Inside these clouded things
    Eyes that see and flying winds
    Feathers drop from the sky above
    Birds pass by without a song of love
    Hate and deceit, feel free
    Monsters that lurk are seen
    The images of these pattered dreams
    unpolished things
    We are the dust of airs dried up fortune
    In heaven the angels are naked
    No wings to take us
    So we escape luck
    By burning patches of clovers
    Blurred all over
    Seen to the unseen
    But unseen to realities eyes
    Only in dreams

    Open close the world that holds
    these blind eyes unclose
    This new world below
    Searching in the dark
    We find secrets of the heart
    And death in the corner smoking a cigarette
    Happy screams, and sad weddings
    Funerals with clowns
    And dressed in all black birthday parties
    Suited for the need of confusion
    Used in the state of illusion
    The black coat is put on one arm at a time
    These lids shut one eye at a time
    And we find, lies in the earth
    The pictures of given births
    our eyes are open
    Yet closed

    Dreams
    Fantasies, discovered
    Living, Breathing, lying
    Searching inside of life
    Reality
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  12. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    winner=allnakey...


    makes no damn sense. All of nakey's opponents pulled a no show
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  13. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    Yea now that I think About it Yea! That's kind of gay
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