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Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by The Thesis, Jul 16, 2005.

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  1. The Thesis

    The Thesis The Beginning

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    can you all check these tracks, i need work and iw ant to become better....damn....


    i will rtf if you drop feed...


    Soundclick:Forsaken Prophecy
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  2. The Thesis

    The Thesis The Beginning

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    need some feedback on these
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  3. The Thesis

    The Thesis The Beginning

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    can someone leave some feedback....
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  4. chucke

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    Wussup dood…

    Yo, just a suggestion, when you post, maybe focus on getting feed for one joint at a time…might better ur chances…

    I peep'd the 1st 2 joints…

    Not bad, sounds like ur in the early stages of development… one positive thing I noticed is that ur vocal vibe matches the vibe of the beats ur rhyming over. BUT, ur enunciation needs to be cleaner… I say work on projecting your vocals cleaner, and put some character behind the vocals… be creative with the lyricism…. all that shit, comes with time.. these 2 joints were not bad… keep on with it bro…pz.

    Chuckie.
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  5. The Thesis

    The Thesis The Beginning

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    thanks for the feedback man...
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  6. The Thesis

    The Thesis The Beginning

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    can i please get some feedback..
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  7. The Thesis

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    come on people need some feedback
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