Ahem vs. MarQuise

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  1. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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  2. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Pick 1 out of the 5 Topics listed

    1. You escape from prison. Where do you run to?

    2. If you could be a teacher for one day, what would you teach and why?

    3. Your parents are in the next room arguing, suddenly you hear 3 gunshots. What do you do?

    4. You are a flower. Tell us what it feels like to blossom

    5. It's 3:25 a.m. And you awake to somebody beation no your door. When you open it, the devil is standing there. He tells you it's time to go. What do you do?


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  3. MarQuise*

    MarQuise* Can You Hear Me*

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    Well im here...
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  4. iLL Script.

    iLL Script. ~Poetic~

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  5. MarQuise*

    MarQuise* Can You Hear Me*

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    Good Luck to u also..
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  6. MarQuise*

    MarQuise* Can You Hear Me*

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    Aarrgghhh, hated all these topics, oh well here goes...

    Topic 3..

    "where my clothes at bitch
    what you mean you forgot
    bitch, get here now
    i told you dont fuk wit me"


    I beg him to stop
    HE constantly beatin her
    he slaps her once, twice,
    as he says, makes her 3 times a lady

    All these nights, I never sleep
    Nas said 'sleep is the cousin of death'
    If I sleep,
    I fear my moms fortune
    she never did wrong
    Forever beatin on her
    My mother, my life.

    One night, i awake to gun shots...

    He shoots her once,
    Shoots her twice,
    With his final shot
    He screams out
    I've finally made you three times a lady

    I run to the room
    Panic stricken
    What you done?
    Thas my moms
    MY MOMS
    I brake down
    In tears of rage
    I get the gun from the floor
    Pull the trigger
    WHA NOW NICCA
    You aint my father
    What you done to my mother

    She lays there,
    Blood everywhere
    My hands touch her warm face
    Not yet cold
    She died minutes ago
    And now all i got is her dead body to hold

    I look to seek help
    The man up there
    Aint heard me callin
    Why cant anybody here me?

    I let the first shot slide
    I let the second shot go
    I Let the third one kill

    The first shot, my mother slid to the ground
    The second shot, she was gone
    The third, i knew she was killed

    In my first shot,
    He fell to the ground

    In my second shot
    I hit the wall

    In my third shot
    I wait, wait to see what it
    gonna do to me...

    Sleep is the cousin of death

    MY DEATH...
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  7. Nice, that threetimes a lady part with the gunshots was imaginative
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  8. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    can't really vote just yet, but then again, I've never read anything by Ahem, so we'll see...keep strong sista...this was quite clever...
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  9. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    winner=MarQuise
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