Agonizing Bliss

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by lpoet, Aug 7, 2003.

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  1. misspimp

    misspimp a.k.a KATURAH

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    Hiding from all emotions
    Refusing to let anyone in
    Ignoring the soothing rhythm of
    My heartbeat
    Thus…befriending my only friend


    Beautiful piece...i understood and felt u on this one most def...

    mad love
    test
  2. mumblez

    mumblez New Member

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    yo this is crazy son, i like it, 1
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  3. MisterEThoughts

    MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth

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    damn what i can say is hotness like no other keep it upp kid damn
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  4. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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  5. eatemup

    eatemup New Member

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    Outstretched my arms and
    Rolled up my sleeves…
    Slit both writs and
    created my own red sea
    Dying to breath…

    yeah this part was on hit the poem it's self was tight liked the flow and everything thing on this nice drop
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  6. Brown_Menace

    Brown_Menace Honey Hitta

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    ey yo Ipoet i got this poem and I'd really appreciate if you'd do a collaboration with me on it. its called my hearts like a tree. thanks.
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  7. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    ^well hit me up and we can collab....

    mahgirba on aim
    indy_aaron on yahoo

    or email me at

    indy_aaron@yahoo.com
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  8. Brown_Menace

    Brown_Menace Honey Hitta

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    aite yo im writing my verse and i'll email it to you soontimes still. im workin on it.
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  9. Revo1

    Revo1 Rhythms & Sounds

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    this was grimm yo. almost narcissistic it's so self-conscious. the part about slitting wrists was scary. agonizing, indeed, lol. peaCe Poetry...
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  10. writeoff

    writeoff blazed

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    ''I’d never before admit this
    But my heart always saw
    What my minds eye pretended
    Not to see…
    I spit in the water
    Ashamed of the reflection
    Of the man I had grown to be..
    Finally realized that the
    Only one on my side
    Was me, so I
    Outstretched my arms and
    Rolled up my sleeves…
    Slit both writs and
    created my own red sea
    Dying to breath…"

    that part was the really stand out from what i had read.. i liked this alot..
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  11. da_after_shock

    da_after_shock New Member

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    that was ill...wow..so many quotes..so lil time..no where to begin and end..i'm goin crazy lol
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  12. h.wood

    h.wood IMAGINATION SUPER STAR

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    uppin it again because i liked it that much
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  13. Wicked5744

    Wicked5744 Last I awoke, it was morn

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    This was very tight. I was feelin this all the way through. The part where you rolled up the sleeves, that kinda scared me a little. Cause I've read pieces in here from some of my friends and they said that and it happened. Don't do it!!!
    Keep the ink flowin...peace.
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  14. varentao

    varentao New Member

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    Indeed, indeed, INDEED...

    I appreciate this piece. Not all of it relative to me. But parts of it, which i moulded into something familiar and related to quite heavily.

    Observing, analysing, feeling, writing...(well, that's brief, but you get the point i am sure)..

    ...resp..
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  15. RuffRiders1lady

    RuffRiders1lady New Member

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    Very nice you are very good, hope to see more from you the name is CJ i also live in Indy u can email me if you would like to do a collabo sometime ruffriders1lady@yahoo.com smile!
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  16. Craccer_Jacc

    Craccer_Jacc SudAnillyst

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    "Loving the hate
    Addicted to the shame
    I’d look for a way out
    ....But I don’t want to change…"





    u know i love your work man i have watched u grow by the miles yo....u have a dope style and we still need to get down on a collab ....i havent been around much cause well i have issues i'm dealing with.....but fahreal yo u are blessed with your written.... never stop
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  17. augee.ali

    augee.ali Lively Up Yourself...

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    That's what the fuck I'm talkin' bout! This is hands down the best I've read from you to date. This really made coming back to the realm worth my while.
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  18. Atmosphera

    Atmosphera New Member

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    You Already Know, As If You Needed To Know From Myself, My Friend This Was By Far One Of Your Best.

    You Captured Truth, Emotion, Love, Sincerety, And Realisim, All In One Bottle (poem) Such A Hard Thing To Do.

    You Flowed And Only Got Better As It Ended A Bit Like Your Red Sea It Only Got Deeper...

    Friend You Are Talented
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